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Saw you on the street today
It made me smile as you passed my way in your electric machine
Down the incline you zoomed
Effortlessly and like a snake you slithered past cars and pedestrians

I couldn't tell if you had the power on
If you engine was running
But at some point in time you where free wheeling
In your electric chair
Hand off the power, just steering

You made me smile today as I had a while
Waiting for my bus
The pleasure was all mine
Hope to see you again sometime
Mr free wheeler

by banjosandwitch 25/05/14

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Free wheeling

Contributed by banjosandwitch on Tuesday, 27th May 2014 @ 08:24:46 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract



Free wheeling

Saw you on the street today
It made me smile as you passed my way in your electric machine
Down the incline you zoomed
Effortlessly and like a snake you slithered past cars and pedestrians

I couldn't tell if you had the power on
If you engine was running
But at some point in time you where free wheeling
In your electric chair
Hand off the power, just steering

You made me smile today as I had a while
Waiting for my bus
The pleasure was all mine
Hope to see you again sometime
Mr free wheeler

by banjosandwitch 25/05/14





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Re: Free wheeling (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 27th May 2014 @ 11:28:39 AM AEST
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Always like to read abstract posts. Use to do alot myself.


Re: Free wheeling (User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on Wednesday, 28th May 2014 @ 02:41:17 PM AEST
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This write gave me cause to smile - loved the imagery and imagination. Very nice nice write, P


Re: Free wheeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Flex4life13 on Wednesday, 28th May 2014 @ 07:40:34 PM AEST
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Love it! Very original.


Re: Free wheeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 30th May 2014 @ 05:14:42 PM AEST
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It's been a long and somewhat tedious week at work this week.
This made me smile and forget all the troubles.
Nice write

Steve




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