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the saltiness in the air
carried by the breeze
rushing through my hair
I can see the waves
running to meet the land
as I start to walk
with my toes squishing sand
I can hear the birds
and every flying screech
as I enjoy
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My Day at the Beach

Contributed by kailas on Saturday, 26th July 2014 @ 04:35:57 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

I can smell the ocean
the saltiness in the air
carried by the breeze
rushing through my hair
I can see the waves
running to meet the land
as I start to walk
with my toes squishing sand
I can hear the birds
and every flying screech
as I enjoy
my day at the beach.

Copyright © kailas ... [ 2014-07-26 04:35:57]
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Re: My Day at the Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Saturday, 26th July 2014 @ 06:31:15 AM AEST
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Nothing like a day at the beach and you took me there,can smell the ocean and want to be there right now.

Re: My Day at the Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 26th July 2014 @ 01:32:23 PM AEST
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absolutely fun and beautifully penned,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: My Day at the Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 26th July 2014 @ 09:32:50 PM AEST
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YET a day
to remember always
your poem makes one believe

all those sounds and
naked feet

the waves seeing wind
bluest or deep
measured like time

Thanks for writing about it so well!

Peace!

Re: My Day at the Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Pogivic on Saturday, 4th April 2015 @ 11:02:27 AM AEST
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A nice little rhyming poem., my favorite kind. You captured the essence of the day. Well written.

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