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Another slide of my finger brings disgust
As I search for content that will make me laugh
A few giggles through the rubbish I find
Yet to pass piggery and corruption is most displeasing
For my eyes are not to look upon such

The expletives start an hyena like uproar
Crude subjects only are praised by the audience
I am in search of the few with rolled eyes
Lost in the wave of shallow immorality

Go on, O beloved stand-up entertainer
Over here, glorified GIF poster
I challenge you, honorable sitcom and film
Hit me with your best script, indulge me
Persuade my humorous side to gain mere ratings
Come up with some wit and striking creativity
That will actually make me laugh
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Make Me Laugh

Contributed by Deidra_Carmichael on Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 05:22:01 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

My remote has failed me again
Another slide of my finger brings disgust
As I search for content that will make me laugh
A few giggles through the rubbish I find
Yet to pass piggery and corruption is most displeasing
For my eyes are not to look upon such

The expletives start an hyena like uproar
Crude subjects only are praised by the audience
I am in search of the few with rolled eyes
Lost in the wave of shallow immorality

Go on, O beloved stand-up entertainer
Over here, glorified GIF poster
I challenge you, honorable sitcom and film
Hit me with your best script, indulge me
Persuade my humorous side to gain mere ratings
Come up with some wit and striking creativity
That will actually make me laugh

Copyright © Deidra_Carmichael ... [ 2014-08-08 17:22:01]
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Re: Make Me Laugh (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 05:46:17 PM AEST
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Brilliant but sounds well *****y and spite full, but i still enjoyed reading it so its all good x

Re: Make Me Laugh (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 05:48:20 PM AEST
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this brought such a smile to my face, as i was cruising channels
and stopped to read your clever poem, i talk to them and cheer
them on to bring comedy! -to no avail mostly,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Make Me Laugh (User Rating: 1 )
by JohnRhinem on Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 06:21:23 PM AEST
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What ever happened to, Jerry Seinfeld ? I like it pure also and makes myself think of these impacts that this so called entertainment medium's genre in most ways has upon our societies especially formative inklings toddlers in their vulerable cribs ~ I'll make you laugh baby girl! Great poem....

Re: Make Me Laugh (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 10:26:08 PM AEST
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Nothing like ol' Mr Ed shows, or Carol Burnett, or shows like that. I know what you're saying. I am guilty of enjoying some of the new "crap" too but some of it does indeed go over board.

Really enjoyed this. You bet your sweet bippy! ;-)

Thanks,

Tim

Re: Make Me Laugh (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 11:52:03 PM AEST
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You have a fan club here!! My favorite line is "Lost in the wave of shallow immorality"..Wish you were a censor--we'd certainly enjoy a better set table if not the feast we long for!
You have "hit me with your best script" and you have my vote! Thanks for saying the necessary to remind us of the fluff we call entertainment.
softerware

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