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Array ( [sid] => 179097 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Vapor [time] => 2014-08-16 23:26:23 [hometext] => just stuff still not poetic [bodytext] => You cannot place me on a shelf,
despite yourself,despite yourself.
Will me away, sorry not today.......
Not even your perfection can zap me away...
I am not vapor, I don't float away.........
Your dismay, your dismay

A lie is a lie. not white,not black
nothing even remotely gray
keep coloring the page
our pages, scribble, erase,scribble, erase
matters not, the fact wont change
blood, blood runs the veins, no change, it is.

Live on, in your perfected bondage
and whisper to yourself
"I am right, I am right"
Tick toc strums the clock
and soon Karma will knock at your door.

(shhhhhhh be careful what you wish for)

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Vapor

Contributed by shelby on Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 11:26:23 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

You cannot place me on a shelf,
despite yourself,despite yourself.
Will me away, sorry not today.......
Not even your perfection can zap me away...
I am not vapor, I don't float away.........
Your dismay, your dismay

A lie is a lie. not white,not black
nothing even remotely gray
keep coloring the page
our pages, scribble, erase,scribble, erase
matters not, the fact wont change
blood, blood runs the veins, no change, it is.

Live on, in your perfected bondage
and whisper to yourself
"I am right, I am right"
Tick toc strums the clock
and soon Karma will knock at your door.

(shhhhhhh be careful what you wish for)

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2014-08-16 23:26:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Vapor (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 17th August 2014 @ 12:42:15 AM AEST
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The tribunal wish it were wide open
whisper till it may
second's perhaps
millisecond's, perhaps many
trillions of combined moments
each one only a bud like rely
like an atom
never could it speak, a myriad
a molecule of gaseous vapor
or residual left behind
in what ever might be left
behind
A conglomerate hint
in reality
shhhhhh be karma in
whispering
within can't be calm
never can be a scene
so real
as now
as silence runs deep.

stuff just is
never so poetic
said the knock

Peace!

Re: Vapor (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Sunday, 17th August 2014 @ 11:24:49 AM AEST
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Well done, I really felt the emotions in this one. Strong, poetry is in the heart, not on paper, so you did a great job with this piece.

The Phantom

Re: Vapor (User Rating: 1 )
by steven_fenton123 on Monday, 18th August 2014 @ 05:14:38 PM AEST
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Very nice!

Re: Vapor (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 30th August 2014 @ 02:08:44 AM AEST
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this seems to me to be about ferguson, and i agree, excellent write,

hugs n' love nessa

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