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Array ( [sid] => 179266 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let Her Win? [time] => 2014-09-13 00:21:49 [hometext] => My Constant Daily Battle [bodytext] => My mind is screaming,
please let her out.
I will protect you,
I will get you out.
Save you from this pain,
and release all of your rage.
Burn it all down,
tear out of this cage.
Turn the switch off,
let go of your control.
And I will come save you,
from this deep dark hole.
I will destroy everything,
and all that you love.
You will never again,
see the light from above.
I will cover you,
in the coldness of hate.
By the time you come back,
it will be too late.
I will have left you nothing,
for you will be empty and shattered.
With no one left to hurt you,
or leave you broken and battered.
Let me take your place,
let me hold your soul.
But in the end,
you will be digging your own hole. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 61 [informant] => fairiepsycho [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Let Her Win?

Contributed by fairiepsycho on Saturday, 13th September 2014 @ 12:21:49 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

My mind is screaming,
please let her out.
I will protect you,
I will get you out.
Save you from this pain,
and release all of your rage.
Burn it all down,
tear out of this cage.
Turn the switch off,
let go of your control.
And I will come save you,
from this deep dark hole.
I will destroy everything,
and all that you love.
You will never again,
see the light from above.
I will cover you,
in the coldness of hate.
By the time you come back,
it will be too late.
I will have left you nothing,
for you will be empty and shattered.
With no one left to hurt you,
or leave you broken and battered.
Let me take your place,
let me hold your soul.
But in the end,
you will be digging your own hole.

Copyright © fairiepsycho ... [ 2014-09-13 00:21:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Let Her Win? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 13th September 2014 @ 08:57:19 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking.
HUGGS, BLESSINGS,
emy

Re: Let Her Win? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th September 2014 @ 09:10:00 PM AEST
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Let them all torn
down by no fault
of their own
be saved indeed.

what's wrong is not them
tell them and step in

easy to be brave when
it's not you

Thank you Fairiepsycho
I think

Peace!

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