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Love we shall forever save, together you and me
So here we lay, in our quiet reverie
With no words to say, just an image of your eternal beauty

So scribe us deep, into the earth
Seal us safe in our love rebirth
Carve us deeper into the soil
Seal us safer in our holy coil

No son of man, can ever do you harm
In this joyful tan, I enjoy your charm
And here we lay, like new born flowers
With no price to pay, but being two dead lovers

Scribe us deep, into the ground
Drag us downward to never be found
Sunk us deeper, into the loam
Carve us deeper keep us in this sacred home
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Dead Lovers

Contributed by Opium on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

As we step in the grave, straight to infinity
Love we shall forever save, together you and me
So here we lay, in our quiet reverie
With no words to say, just an image of your eternal beauty

So scribe us deep, into the earth
Seal us safe in our love rebirth
Carve us deeper into the soil
Seal us safer in our holy coil

No son of man, can ever do you harm
In this joyful tan, I enjoy your charm
And here we lay, like new born flowers
With no price to pay, but being two dead lovers

Scribe us deep, into the ground
Drag us downward to never be found
Sunk us deeper, into the loam
Carve us deeper keep us in this sacred home

Copyright © Opium ... [ 2003-05-21 23:05:00]
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Re: Dead Lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 01:13:15 AM AEST
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very enjoyable and interesting write, love the images:) ~hugs nessa

Re: Dead Lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 09:08:39 PM AEST
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Awesome liked this one, but then death always interested me. And you have put it into words that bring forth such vivd images.
Look forward to more of your work.

Re: Dead Lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 10:32:08 AM AEST
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mmmm y do u always figure urself dead with soemone ,or ur lover is dead , ya3neh u know that ma 7a ysorlak 7ada w enta 3ayish :P lol good poem :) but u know i dont like those sad ones (eh mbala)

GINA

Re: Dead Lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 09:04:18 AM AEST
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You have described shared death so beautifully..Its almost romantic lol..Excellent!!

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