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Array ( [sid] => 179326 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cold and alone in the old feather duvet [time] => 2014-09-22 13:02:23 [hometext] => I sit here and repeat the tears from the waterfall of gold loving water [bodytext] => Cold on alone in the old feather duvet
Laying here wondering how time has passed
Where were people
And where was love
As I laid here I fell into a dream
Where wishes came true and love was real
As long as I've lived I haven’t doubted in love for a bit
But now as the night gets closer and darkness surrounds me I’m not so sure
If love was real then why am I alone tonight?
Why are people crying as I sit here and repeat the tears from the waterfall of gold loving water
Love and anxiety is the new match
We can’t control what we have never felt
Love was so close, so I thought
Love was so near to my heart, so I thought
But disappeared the day that I opened my eyes to the darkness and clarity
I’ve been fooled and played around but still haven’t stopped believing
Tell me your story, tell me your sorrows and show me your future
Let me love you, let me stay tonight
I’m only human but I haven’t lost my soul
I’m still capable of loving, still capable of caring…
Why can’t you do the same?
All I need from someone is caring and someone to believe in me
I’m full of anger and full of anxiety
I ain’t happy no more
The smile has slowly disappeared from my face even though I tried to keep it
Putting up a straight look to my face trying not to show them the damage that they made
I’m only human I believed when you said that you love me
How can a best friend do this to her mate?
How can someone lie for so many years?
I’m happy that I finally came to know the truth
Thanks for nothing
Thanks for making my doubt in love and people to trust
You can’t trust anyone, that’s what I’ve learned for a little bit a life experience
But there’s one thing I don’t understand?
Then you can’t trust me?
I know you can trust me… or is that just a fantasy…

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Cold and alone in the old feather duvet

Contributed by Apollonia on Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 01:02:23 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Cold on alone in the old feather duvet
Laying here wondering how time has passed
Where were people
And where was love
As I laid here I fell into a dream
Where wishes came true and love was real
As long as I've lived I haven’t doubted in love for a bit
But now as the night gets closer and darkness surrounds me I’m not so sure
If love was real then why am I alone tonight?
Why are people crying as I sit here and repeat the tears from the waterfall of gold loving water
Love and anxiety is the new match
We can’t control what we have never felt
Love was so close, so I thought
Love was so near to my heart, so I thought
But disappeared the day that I opened my eyes to the darkness and clarity
I’ve been fooled and played around but still haven’t stopped believing
Tell me your story, tell me your sorrows and show me your future
Let me love you, let me stay tonight
I’m only human but I haven’t lost my soul
I’m still capable of loving, still capable of caring…
Why can’t you do the same?
All I need from someone is caring and someone to believe in me
I’m full of anger and full of anxiety
I ain’t happy no more
The smile has slowly disappeared from my face even though I tried to keep it
Putting up a straight look to my face trying not to show them the damage that they made
I’m only human I believed when you said that you love me
How can a best friend do this to her mate?
How can someone lie for so many years?
I’m happy that I finally came to know the truth
Thanks for nothing
Thanks for making my doubt in love and people to trust
You can’t trust anyone, that’s what I’ve learned for a little bit a life experience
But there’s one thing I don’t understand?
Then you can’t trust me?
I know you can trust me… or is that just a fantasy…





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Re: Cold and alone in the old feather duvet (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 01:10:09 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings, love hurts, that's the truth,
but i would and did even tho pain is all i have there in that
spot of my heart, a void of memories............

hugs n' love nessa


Re: Cold and alone in the old feather duvet (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 01:42:55 PM AEST
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Hi there

I had this hole intellectual comment planed in my head as I was reading your poem. However all I actually want to say. Even though it's sad, don't give up on love. God bless

Greetings
Ru


Re: Cold and alone in the old feather duvet (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd October 2014 @ 10:57:31 PM AEST
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I love this! The flow, and the emotions which you conveyed just makes the poem so powerful. This is truly a pleasure to read :)


Re: Cold and alone in the old feather duvet (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 3rd October 2014 @ 04:02:52 PM AEST
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It must be hard to keep on believing in something when so many times it has been trampled into the dirt.
I'm sure too many people have told you to keep on having faith and things will turn out the way you want.
Faith has to come from you though, not because someone tells you it should.
Fingers crossed that everything happens the way YOU want it to.

Steve


Re: Cold and alone in the old feather duvet (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th December 2014 @ 01:13:24 PM AEST
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I trust you.


Re: Cold and alone in the old feather duvet (User Rating: 1 )
by Socreights on Sunday, 25th January 2015 @ 08:15:00 PM AEST
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Great poem. Really love the use of the feather duvet as a metaphor for the futility of finding comfort from the desolation of the emotion. There is a strong pull to the rhythm of this poem. It is evocative of waters and currents which is further evocative - on account of the theme - of Ophelia drowning. A lot comes together to make a beautiful work.


Re: Cold and alone in the old feather duvet (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Friday, 13th March 2015 @ 10:37:02 PM AEST
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Beautiful!




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