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[aid] => mick
[title] => Null and Void
[time] => 2014-11-12 11:25:17
[hometext] => Thank you, dear poets. For I would be nothing without you.
[bodytext] => Maybe you would rather I not talk to you
Maybe every moment has been misconstrued-
By me. Your unwitting, loyal, frienemy
I might have missed Cupid shooting aimlessly
Did you ever even care for me?
A crumpled leaf on your giving tree,
Or did you just like me on my knees...
Pawned servings to amplify my pleas
Or perhaps my verbs no longer make you stiff,
My words haphazardly jumping off a cliff
Be a dear, and please catch them before they fall
I'm shrinking in size, now only two feet tall
Do you hear me? Please don't run away,
I need you so much, I dare not say
I am nothing. With or without you.
Stark greys and black without your bold hue
Maybe my heart's home is far away from here
Devoid of love, on another stratosphere
My unlucky hand dealt to save you; not me.
So take this ***** write and set yourself free.
[comments] => 9
[counter] => 583
[topic] => 69
[informant] => hauntedscorp
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Null and Void
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hauntedscorp
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Wednesday, 12th November 2014 @ 11:25:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
poets
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Maybe you would rather I not talk to you
Maybe every moment has been misconstrued-
By me. Your unwitting, loyal, frienemy
I might have missed Cupid shooting aimlessly
Did you ever even care for me?
A crumpled leaf on your giving tree,
Or did you just like me on my knees...
Pawned servings to amplify my pleas
Or perhaps my verbs no longer make you stiff,
My words haphazardly jumping off a cliff
Be a dear, and please catch them before they fall
I'm shrinking in size, now only two feet tall
Do you hear me? Please don't run away,
I need you so much, I dare not say
I am nothing. With or without you.
Stark greys and black without your bold hue
Maybe my heart's home is far away from here
Devoid of love, on another stratosphere
My unlucky hand dealt to save you; not me.
So take this ***** write and set yourself free.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2014-11-12 11:25:17]
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Re: Null and Void
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by fredmonte101 on
Wednesday, 12th November 2014 @ 11:42:12 AM AEST
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| A hearts cry wonderfully put into poetic words. |
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Re: Null and Void
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th November 2014 @ 12:51:30 PM AEST
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Firstly, it is far from *****. It's a poetic plea; honest and adorable. You are class.
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Re: Null and Void
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Wednesday, 12th November 2014 @ 04:54:20 PM AEST
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| Thank you for inspiring me. This poem is just more evidence of that. Brilliant stuff. |
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Re: Null and Void
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th November 2014 @ 08:48:14 PM AEST
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Aw, twernt nuthin. :p
If other poets inspired this, then we all need to keepa writin'!!! and so do you. wow, this some gooooooooooooood *****!!! |
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Re: Null and Void
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by Jigget on
Wednesday, 12th November 2014 @ 10:57:31 PM AEST
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| i like your work. |
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Re: Null and Void
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 13th November 2014 @ 11:27:18 PM AEST
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| I just had to sit here and absorb this with tears in my eyes for a minute or two. I feel so much of what you feel. Why do we trade so much of ourselves away with so little in return? is it that hard of a demand to be loved? If I could visit you I would, and we would be awesome! like a crime fighting duo, but an emotional demon fighting dou. this sounds really cool. comic book series??? |
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Re: Null and Void
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 09:21:06 AM AEST
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whoever this person is they seem like a psychic vampyre, open the window and
get out the garlic they are not worthy of you! relationships can become so entangled
tho none are worth negativity to your soul, my friend, ~ha! there's a reason why i live
alone up on this mountain! take your own advice and set yourself free of humans who
are takers and not givers, you'll be happier for it in the long run, life is too short for such
nonsense, ~always remember you are a beautiful person, a talented writer and you matter!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Null and Void
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by softerware on
Sunday, 16th November 2014 @ 09:10:34 PM AEST
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The words you have left here so many times, so many ways, testify to your worth. You are valued. unique, and still searching for your comfort! Discontent makes us creative.. Were all our questions answered, what would we have to say? May you always be the seeker who invites us to think, and feel, and search as you do!
softerware |
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Re: Null and Void
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 16th November 2014 @ 10:58:52 PM AEST
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Love the title
never are you null n void with us
kepp on flowing brother. |
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