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dealing with dementia,
just can't seem to figure life out...
the last time someone told the truth
I can't remember.
I can't stay on task
I'm in daze
trying to find the answer,
I'll never break through
on this strange pursiut
because
I always forget what I was thinking.

I got only one friend
and he doesn't really like me
he"s on the stage in lifes game
while I perfer to stay the shadows,
and
things like that blow mind....
because for some reason
that I can't figure it out
there's a need for us to have a connection.

There was a moment
when I thought I had it
but it quickly faded away
as a new emotional torture came alive
once again distracted.
I live in a wiggly world
where there is always pain
and I
I will continue to search for the reason
for the reason
I need something to believe in
as I am trapped on this crazy roundabout.

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Strange Pursuit

Contributed by UNKNOWN_UTOPIA on Tuesday, 18th November 2014 @ 11:58:38 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Another day in the confusion
dealing with dementia,
just can't seem to figure life out...
the last time someone told the truth
I can't remember.
I can't stay on task
I'm in daze
trying to find the answer,
I'll never break through
on this strange pursiut
because
I always forget what I was thinking.

I got only one friend
and he doesn't really like me
he"s on the stage in lifes game
while I perfer to stay the shadows,
and
things like that blow mind....
because for some reason
that I can't figure it out
there's a need for us to have a connection.

There was a moment
when I thought I had it
but it quickly faded away
as a new emotional torture came alive
once again distracted.
I live in a wiggly world
where there is always pain
and I
I will continue to search for the reason
for the reason
I need something to believe in
as I am trapped on this crazy roundabout.

Copyright Â© UNKNOWN_UTOPIA ... [ 2014-11-18 11:58:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Strange Pursuit (User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on Tuesday, 18th November 2014 @ 05:12:22 PM AEST
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I take so much away from this poem. It is brilliant. I feel like.....if my dear 80~something year old grandmother could put her life into words, this poem would be it. Thank you.

Best,
Fox

Re: Strange Pursuit (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Tuesday, 18th November 2014 @ 10:01:17 PM AEST
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Dizzying circles…unable to concentrate…distracted.."I'll never break through.." I can identify with this!
Stay with it. There is always a reason. When I was 13 I babysat a retarded child next door. I hated it.
When I was 30, I gave birth to a retarded child--I was better prepared. She is my angel, too retarded to know it. There is always a reason. Delayed? Learning patience. Blocked? learning to go around. In Pain? Learning endurance. When all is going well= we don't grow. However, wish you a restful period of dormancy!!! Come back and write with a vengeance.

softerware

Re: Strange Pursuit (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 19th November 2014 @ 11:15:55 AM AEST
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I like the way you closed this write- nice! It sure can seem like things aren't moving, or at least not in the direction we hoped, but change occurs over time. Keep plugging away and know that you are on the right path. Roundabout or not, your "turn" will come.

~Scorp

Re: Strange Pursuit (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 19th November 2014 @ 01:29:38 PM AEST
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i believe we all feel like this sometimes, tho from it you
have created something beautiful, and if all was perfect
happiness all the time what ever would we wright of?

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Strange Pursuit (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th November 2014 @ 07:46:16 PM AEST
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This was very tough to read. so tough that I had read it last night but was unable to comment because it unsettled me so much as it reminded me of my Mom and when she had dementia. Now that's poetry in action.

Great poem!!!!

Thanks,

Tim

Re: Strange Pursuit (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 05:19:02 AM AEST
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Agree with Scorp, your ending is very good. Glad I finally started reading from you. and thanks for the comments you left me.

Re: Strange Pursuit (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 01:31:45 AM AEST
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Well now. so soorry you don't consider me a friend any more but great writing.

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