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Array ( [sid] => 180051 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Which do I choose [time] => 2014-12-17 01:53:48 [hometext] => Tony Johnson Jr. [bodytext] => Which one do I Choose.

Which do I choose?
I can not decide.
Do I choose the woman or do I choose the child?
Which do I choose?
Emotions or Logic
The one I can touch or the I can’t see?
Which do I choose?
Whats safe or unknown.
If I choose wrong I’ll end up alone...
Which do I choose?
The step or the actual.
But can I make either work?
Which do I choose?
Does really matter?
If I can’t get back to Japan the seed you planted with grow up all gnarled and any “family” dreams will all shatter.
I’ll hope, and I’ll wish and I’ll pray for a sign,
that whoever it is will finally be mine.
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Which do I choose

Contributed by BumpyJ on Wednesday, 17th December 2014 @ 01:53:48 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Which one do I Choose.

Which do I choose?
I can not decide.
Do I choose the woman or do I choose the child?
Which do I choose?
Emotions or Logic
The one I can touch or the I can’t see?
Which do I choose?
Whats safe or unknown.
If I choose wrong I’ll end up alone...
Which do I choose?
The step or the actual.
But can I make either work?
Which do I choose?
Does really matter?
If I can’t get back to Japan the seed you planted with grow up all gnarled and any “family” dreams will all shatter.
I’ll hope, and I’ll wish and I’ll pray for a sign,
that whoever it is will finally be mine.

Copyright Â© BumpyJ ... [ 2014-12-17 01:53:48]
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Re: Which do I choose (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Wednesday, 17th December 2014 @ 04:05:27 AM AEST
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Hi Bumpyj welcome aboard. I like the concept of your poem. I am guessing that you are from Japan, just offering some advice as I am unsure as to how good your english is. There is a preview button when you go to submit your work. If you click on that it will not submit your work but you can preview it. Look it over edit your work if you want to and then finally click on submit. I hope to read more of your work over time. I have many poems here. I hope in time to see many more of your poems here as well.

Re: Which do I choose (User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on Wednesday, 24th December 2014 @ 09:48:32 AM AEST
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You have a lot here. I appreciate that you wrote this in poem form. And obviously you have a tough decision in front of you. I wish you clarity and luck. Thank you for you comments on my latest poem. I will take another look at at and adjust.

Best,
Fox

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