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in this burning confusion
there is no healthy survival in rooms unattached...
still I
I watch as the other cripple pilgrims crawl
twisted and displaced
in a world
where everything has gone wrong.

Lost souls broken and shattered
line up
to go to the tower
and be assimilated,
with the new technology
the message of wrong spreads globally
infecting the world
keeping us confused and dazed and defenseless.

Innervisions in the confusion
reveal The stench of a lifetime
but the devourer is to strong
and the minions of evil
make sure the pain of living
never goes away.

Words have no meaning
when they are based on lies
but the broken audience is captivated
and will believe anything,
In the tower
false prophets are preaching
tortured souls applaud
what they are not understanding.....
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Tower Of Babel Rising

Contributed by UNKNOWN_UTOPIA on Monday, 5th January 2015 @ 02:43:12 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Here in the haze
in this burning confusion
there is no healthy survival in rooms unattached...
still I
I watch as the other cripple pilgrims crawl
twisted and displaced
in a world
where everything has gone wrong.

Lost souls broken and shattered
line up
to go to the tower
and be assimilated,
with the new technology
the message of wrong spreads globally
infecting the world
keeping us confused and dazed and defenseless.

Innervisions in the confusion
reveal The stench of a lifetime
but the devourer is to strong
and the minions of evil
make sure the pain of living
never goes away.

Words have no meaning
when they are based on lies
but the broken audience is captivated
and will believe anything,
In the tower
false prophets are preaching
tortured souls applaud
what they are not understanding.....

Copyright © UNKNOWN_UTOPIA ... [ 2015-01-05 02:43:12]
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Re: Tower Of Babel Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th January 2015 @ 05:36:06 PM AEST
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Love it!! Such powerful imagery and emotions are conveyed by the poem.

Re: Tower Of Babel Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Friday, 9th January 2015 @ 08:30:42 PM AEST
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I am in the tower and my hands are poised while other hands heal o poison, yet still I hesitate, and contemplate that we are all as one , to still my wavering will my mantra I mindfully meander and meditate

Re: Tower Of Babel Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th January 2015 @ 10:32:36 PM AEST
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an exquisite piece, much to ponder, so beautifully penned,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Tower Of Babel Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 01:01:18 AM AEST
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your natural talent for writing is blossoming by leaps and bounds. This is an amazing write here. Your wisdom is showing off too. proud of u.
luv ya,
emy

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