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Array ( [sid] => 18040 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Running through the fields of Heaven. [time] => 2003-05-26 12:35:00 [hometext] => My dog finally passed Fri. it was a tough week for us both! I really tried everything!
Now hes free from pain! [bodytext] => Now your able to run,
Run through the fields of heaven,
your time here is now done,
when you passed 20 mts.after eleven,
I cried so hard to see you go,
I was there till the end,
Watching you take the last breath,so slow,
your pain I could not mend,
Four days you layed there still,
not able to move to drink,
Its hard even though you were ill,
I cry just to even think,
Now your gone,to that place,
We will miss you so,
not able to see that furry face,
as a puppy I watched you grow,
19 years we had you here,
how blessed we should be,
not many dogs live that many years,
now your souls set free,
Free to run the fields of heaven,
free to go anywhere,
beyond the clouds there within,
running with out a care! [comments] => 10 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 48 [informant] => LOWMAN613 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Running through the fields of Heaven.

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Now your able to run,
Run through the fields of heaven,
your time here is now done,
when you passed 20 mts.after eleven,
I cried so hard to see you go,
I was there till the end,
Watching you take the last breath,so slow,
your pain I could not mend,
Four days you layed there still,
not able to move to drink,
Its hard even though you were ill,
I cry just to even think,
Now your gone,to that place,
We will miss you so,
not able to see that furry face,
as a puppy I watched you grow,
19 years we had you here,
how blessed we should be,
not many dogs live that many years,
now your souls set free,
Free to run the fields of heaven,
free to go anywhere,
beyond the clouds there within,
running with out a care!




Copyright © LOWMAN613 ... [ 2003-05-26 12:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Running through the fields of Heaven. (User Rating: 1 )
by XoIrishXo on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 12:41:44 PM AEST
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AAwwwwwww...I am so sorry for your loss!! Your poem is a beautiful tribute!! XoXo


Re: Running through the fields of Heaven. (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 01:11:57 PM AEST
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Beautiful write. Its nice to know others also think of thier beloved pets as family. they give so much unconditional love, how we are so thankful to have such a treasure. I'm sorry you have lost yours, but he will always remain with you. Perhaps a time will tell, another will someday come forth.
Amber Rose :)


Re: Running through the fields of Heaven. (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 01:30:15 PM AEST
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That was a lovely poem. Sorry for your loss. I've lost quite of few pets. You'll always miss them. Lovely write.


Re: Running through the fields of Heaven. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 02:12:14 PM AEST
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Christina, I'm so sorry!! This is a great loss.We went through this also. I have no children and she was my child. You will never forget them!!
Michelle


Re: Running through the fields of Heaven. (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 02:29:56 PM AEST
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a beautiful tribute to a devoted member of the family
Shari


Re: Running through the fields of Heaven. (User Rating: 1 )
by Listener on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 08:08:17 PM AEST
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I'm soo sorry to hear of your loss. It's so hard after they've been there with you so long!!! I'm not sure if it was the great wrinting or the emotion that brought me to tears. keep your head up their pain is over


Re: Running through the fields of Heaven. (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 11:22:12 PM AEST
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I am so sorry Christina. But your poem is right on. Mom is petting him right now. Godbless-------Russ


Re: Running through the fields of Heaven. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 12:45:31 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry Christina I know it is so hard to see them suffer and harder still to see them go but as long as you keep all of your wonderful memories of him he will never truely be gone.


Re: Running through the fields of Heaven. (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 11:40:25 AM AEST
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I remember Bandit, running through the fields at camp, and how we ran after him for HOURS....now he is chain free and loving it.
I know mom is there with him, givin him a treat and lots of hugs and kiss. Love ya much, your sis, Monika


Re: Running through the fields of Heaven. (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 05:05:34 PM AEST
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such a beautiful tribute to your dear furbaby, im so sorry for your loss, now he has his feet upon the rainbows you will ever see, ~hugs n' love nessa




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