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Array ( [sid] => 18052 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Why are you so angry ? [time] => 2003-05-26 18:35:00 [hometext] => These are my flames of passion.
What shall I do when my love is angry,
and she does not look at my face..
Please read and enjoy...venkat

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[bodytext] => Why don’t you look at me?
Why are you so angry?
O my sweet heart! O my soul mate!
Thou art virtuous and most beautiful
Please give up thy anger and allow me
To drink honey from thy lotus face
As my heart is blazing with
Love and passion flames!
If thou speakest with love
The luster of thy teeth dispels
the fear of darkness in me!
Please grant me happiness
To the wild gees of my eyes
Through your moon like face
And quench thirst of my soul
Through nectar of thy rosy lips
If thou art really very much angry
Pierce me with thy sharpest glances
Pierce me with darts of thy sharp nails
If thou so desire to punish me
Imprison me in thy arms and
Bite me with thy grinding teeth
And punish me in such a way
Pleasurable to your mind and
Thou art my beautiful soul mate
Thou art my fountain of life and
Priceless jewel to adorn my heart
O my soul mate, I bow down to you
And kiss thy tender shoots like feet
As I adore them always in my heart
Please follow me to fulfill my yearnings
O my sweet heart, O my soul mate!!

26-5-2003

[comments] => 16 [counter] => 728 [topic] => 2 [informant] => venkat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Why are you so angry ?

Contributed by venkat on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Why don’t you look at me?
Why are you so angry?
O my sweet heart! O my soul mate!
Thou art virtuous and most beautiful
Please give up thy anger and allow me
To drink honey from thy lotus face
As my heart is blazing with
Love and passion flames!
If thou speakest with love
The luster of thy teeth dispels
the fear of darkness in me!
Please grant me happiness
To the wild gees of my eyes
Through your moon like face
And quench thirst of my soul
Through nectar of thy rosy lips
If thou art really very much angry
Pierce me with thy sharpest glances
Pierce me with darts of thy sharp nails
If thou so desire to punish me
Imprison me in thy arms and
Bite me with thy grinding teeth
And punish me in such a way
Pleasurable to your mind and
Thou art my beautiful soul mate
Thou art my fountain of life and
Priceless jewel to adorn my heart
O my soul mate, I bow down to you
And kiss thy tender shoots like feet
As I adore them always in my heart
Please follow me to fulfill my yearnings
O my sweet heart, O my soul mate!!

26-5-2003





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Re: Why are you so angry ? (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 07:31:43 PM AEST
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so very beautiful
Shari


Re: Why are you so angry ? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 11:55:44 PM AEST
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Lovely write, Venkat..
Jenni


Re: Why are you so angry ? (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 12:15:47 AM AEST
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What a lovely poem!
ChristinA


Re: Why are you so angry ? (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 12:19:19 AM AEST
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This is so very beautiful.


Re: Why are you so angry ? (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 02:09:55 AM AEST
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I hope she reads this ... she won't be angry for long :)))) Wonderful poetry ... emotional write ... Jan


Re: Why are you so angry ? (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 02:20:41 AM AEST
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Wow!..my wife is a tender hearted woman..she never gets angry.. if she reads this she will be surprised and perhaps tries to feign angry.. ha ha ha..thanks for your sweet comment.. venkat


Re: Why are you so angry ? (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 03:00:39 AM AEST
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this poem is awesome, dear friend... i LOVE it... this is as it should be... your poem is so animalistically beautiful... deep and unaltered emotion of anger and love... ah... ode to your soul-mate and you (i just posted one about my soul-mate, today was our 2nd wedding anniversary)... blessings to you... michele


Re: Why are you so angry ? (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 03:26:08 AM AEST
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Wow, what a beautiful comment.. I know this is animalistic but ther is one mystic truth behind this drama..... any how I have no objection to enjoy divine love in its purest form as I see that divine love every where.... venkat.


Re: Why are you so angry ? (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 09:48:51 AM AEST
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Oh Venkat if she were to read this wonderful poem she would'nt be angry with you anylonger. You capture each emtion so well in this piece of art. As all your work a masterpiece!!
Michelle


Re: Why are you so angry ? (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 02:26:32 AM AEST
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What can I add to what has already been said about this tremendous poem. Such expression of love is far beyond my capability (sort of an area of which my mind "fights shy")


Re: Why are you so angry ? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 04:41:57 AM AEST
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Awesome tenderness abundant, it took my breath away.
I usually prefer dark poetry but this was definately a good read.


Re: Why are you so angry ? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 04:45:18 PM AEST
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ahhh a beautiful example of unconditional love........*sigh*
"If thou so desire to punish me
Imprison me in thy arms and
Bite me with thy grinding teeth" i know you wrote these lines in all seriousness but i had to smile and laugh a little as they are so cute:) ~hugs n' love nessa


Re: Why are you so angry ? (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 08:16:50 AM AEST
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Wow... this is very bad.. but conningly beautiful..


Re: Why are you so angry ? (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 08:17:02 AM AEST
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Wow... this is very bad.. but conningly beautiful..


Re: Why are you so angry ? (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 08:17:24 AM AEST
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Wow... this is very bad.. but conningly beautiful..


Re: Why are you so angry ? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 02:44:20 AM AEST
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Beautiful and passionate plea of apology for unknown actions. Willingness to accept consequences for unknown hurts. This must have turned her thoughts around. Magnificent.

Rita




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