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Music Man
I'd craft you a song
Sing you a tune

It would take you away
To a place that's free
What a melody
It would be

Awaken your senses
Numb your fears
With much joy
Would come the tears

It would explain
What feelings I have
That I could never convey
The usual way

A song for your ears
Words for your heart
Full of emotion
Till death do we part

If I was a Music Man
If I could sing
But just one song

I'd sing it to you
And you would be
My number one fan
And I your man

Together we'd be
One hell of a band
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Music Man

Contributed by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 24th February 2015 @ 09:58:51 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I wish I was a
Music Man
I'd craft you a song
Sing you a tune

It would take you away
To a place that's free
What a melody
It would be

Awaken your senses
Numb your fears
With much joy
Would come the tears

It would explain
What feelings I have
That I could never convey
The usual way

A song for your ears
Words for your heart
Full of emotion
Till death do we part

If I was a Music Man
If I could sing
But just one song

I'd sing it to you
And you would be
My number one fan
And I your man

Together we'd be
One hell of a band




Copyright © JamesStockdale ... [ 2015-02-24 21:58:51]
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Re: Music Man (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 03:12:50 AM AEST
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Hehe. It's a cute poem with a nice charming metaphor.
Nice job. :)


Re: Music Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 09:02:40 AM AEST
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Nice poem, but you switch your stanzas back and forth with your rhyming, which can throw off the reader. It breaks the flow a bit. Keep on writing though, looking forward to reading more.


Wayne


Re: Music Man (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 10:35:30 AM AEST
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I felt like a teenaged girl again, reading this, all giggly and fidgety. Beautiful! A true smile inducer from start to helluva finish ;)



~Scorp


Re: Music Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 08:58:54 PM AEST
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Very good poem, James. Makes me want to be musical.


Re: Music Man (User Rating: 1 )
by kmec1990 on Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 11:25:54 PM AEST
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Made me smile, which I have not done a lot lately, lucky girl your muse. Great write
K


Re: Music Man (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 11:37:08 PM AEST
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sweetly penned, and such beautiful sentiments!

hugs n' love nessa


Re: Music Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th September 2020 @ 05:05:12 AM AEST
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// This is without a doubt one of your best poems. I really wish there was a way to feature it.

Very magical. You may not be a music man but you played like a virtuoso!!!




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