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Array ( [sid] => 180628 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just Do As I Say [time] => 2015-02-25 10:14:17 [hometext] => By: E. Wayne Searles [bodytext] =>
Sometimes emotions over run me
when simple things are just so broken
Then I go crazy in my mind
because worthless to others are the words I have spoken

Feeling as if I am speaking
to a wall or non-responsive thing
Really not understanding the demeanor of others
but yet the very same words I sing

I mentor myself
trying to learn their negative way
Argument seems to be the contrast
unless I offer some sort of pay

My body is on fire
from the heat that burns within
Disobeyed simple given orders
my patients are wearing mighty thin

Just do as I say
and get on with your life with ease
Stop making me repeat myself
and constantly saying please

Pushing me to a limit
having no idea when I will explode
You often ignore the words I say
remaining in your entombed mode

Total lack of respect
my limits are almost met
If I explode, the world will change
would you be willing to make a bet

Don’t push it so far
just listen and understand the words I say
This place will be much better for all
in such a better way

Written on 25 February 2015
Copyright © 2015 E. Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
http://www.poeticquest-1.biglaunch.net
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Just Do As I Say

Contributed by waynster on Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 10:14:17 AM in AEST
Topic: oops




Sometimes emotions over run me
when simple things are just so broken
Then I go crazy in my mind
because worthless to others are the words I have spoken

Feeling as if I am speaking
to a wall or non-responsive thing
Really not understanding the demeanor of others
but yet the very same words I sing

I mentor myself
trying to learn their negative way
Argument seems to be the contrast
unless I offer some sort of pay

My body is on fire
from the heat that burns within
Disobeyed simple given orders
my patients are wearing mighty thin

Just do as I say
and get on with your life with ease
Stop making me repeat myself
and constantly saying please

Pushing me to a limit
having no idea when I will explode
You often ignore the words I say
remaining in your entombed mode

Total lack of respect
my limits are almost met
If I explode, the world will change
would you be willing to make a bet

Don’t push it so far
just listen and understand the words I say
This place will be much better for all
in such a better way

Written on 25 February 2015
Copyright © 2015 E. Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
http://www.poeticquest-1.biglaunch.net




Copyright © waynster ... [ 2015-02-25 10:14:17]
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Re: Just Do As I Say (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 10:27:49 AM AEST
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I'm listening. Your words are not worthless on any level.
I like how my mind was flipping back and forth as to who you may have written this to- the reader, or yourself- perhaps a bit of both? Sometimes we are unaware of the impact we are making, so just keep trudging forward.


Thanks for posting.



~Scorp


Re: Just Do As I Say (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 12:19:27 PM AEST
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Emotions we all feel.
Sometimes they take their toll.
Another great poem!




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