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Hair styling, chores, babysitting
Workouts, rehearsals, devotions
My daily life is a schedule

I wake up acknowledging each task
Sipping my tea or coffee
Preventing unnecessary dwelling
For I know the work will come on time

Coming home makes all the difference
I complete my checklist promptly
Knowing you are on the other end
Waiting for me to greet you and chat

Time comes around and we have a small conversation
One that's late and causes us to end with a lack of freedom
For I must fall asleep and function the next day
And you have a virtual wonder world to attend to

Honestly I miss the free flow of memorable times
Time didn't matter and neither did the console's beckon
We schedule everything including emotional bond
Why can't we deviate here and revert to earlier ways

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Our Daily Schedule

Contributed by Deidra_Carmichael on Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 09:19:08 AM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

Academics, family time, sleep
Hair styling, chores, babysitting
Workouts, rehearsals, devotions
My daily life is a schedule

I wake up acknowledging each task
Sipping my tea or coffee
Preventing unnecessary dwelling
For I know the work will come on time

Coming home makes all the difference
I complete my checklist promptly
Knowing you are on the other end
Waiting for me to greet you and chat

Time comes around and we have a small conversation
One that's late and causes us to end with a lack of freedom
For I must fall asleep and function the next day
And you have a virtual wonder world to attend to

Honestly I miss the free flow of memorable times
Time didn't matter and neither did the console's beckon
We schedule everything including emotional bond
Why can't we deviate here and revert to earlier ways

Copyright Â© Deidra_Carmichael ... [ 2015-02-28 09:19:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Our Daily Schedule (User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 03:13:45 PM AEST
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Touché! This is so incredibly relatable. Thank you.

Best,

Fox

Re: Our Daily Schedule (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 05:33:24 PM AEST
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Exactly! we do overload and compartmentalise and prioritise our funny little lives to bits.Technology does enable that as well as create the circumstances of separation in the first place.

I felt such a lovely, warm, and sad sentimentality when I read your poem, very sincere and gentle, and plaintively insightful. S

Re: Our Daily Schedule (User Rating: 1 )
by kmec1990 on Sunday, 1st March 2015 @ 08:35:50 AM AEST
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Amen, then the kids grow up the schedule disappears and you find there is nothing left to talk about. Great write

Re: Our Daily Schedule (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 5th March 2015 @ 09:19:50 AM AEST
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What Spike said.
Great read!

Re: Our Daily Schedule (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 7th March 2015 @ 04:40:39 PM AEST
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You ain't never going back there, and you and me are to blame .(not having any of that 'you and I' business, that's not grammar!)
Did we stand up and be counted? No, we went with the flow, and lost everything.

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