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What is it?

Success

I've got to make it

Success

I have to raise the bar

Success

you can never go too far

Success

So difficult to obtain

Success

And even harder to maintain

Success

How do I know I've made it?

Success

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Success

Contributed by Beyfoxman5 on Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 03:08:02 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Success

What is it?

Success

I've got to make it

Success

I have to raise the bar

Success

you can never go too far

Success

So difficult to obtain

Success

And even harder to maintain

Success

How do I know I've made it?

Success

Again, what is it?

Copyright Â© Beyfoxman5 ... [ 2015-02-28 15:08:02]
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Re: Success (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmy79 on Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 03:32:41 PM AEST
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Look outside the box success can apply to the rich and famous and the pop and movie stars success can apply to the child from a one parent family with little money who made it to university on a shoe string. Define success in as many ways as you can being a decent human being with good social skills is a success I think your poem sums it up beautifully.

Re: Success (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 04:36:50 PM AEST
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Is this what they call a blurt poem?

Wayne

Re: Success (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 10:58:01 PM AEST
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Tenth grade, topic in high school class, write essay on what success means. Impossible I thought then.
Strive for success, I could not. I was too damn young.
Failure comes and leaves something imprinted upon your mind, if you are lucky. If you're not so lucky, success
is impossible. I mean what would be the whole point
of success otherwise said the animal born to love and be loved.

Peace!

Re: Success (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Sunday, 1st March 2015 @ 09:24:25 AM AEST
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Really cool. Getting into e.e. *****s land a bit there. I adore his ability to say "Eff off to your 'rules'....I write from my mind and heart, both in free reign."

I dig the concept...I would find a line to emphasize how hollow it is...that once held, the vessel is empty, and the things that are free are those of substance and wealth.

As said....cool, cool

Invierno PS. Good to read you again...been away for a bit.

Re: Success (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 10th March 2015 @ 06:34:17 PM AEST
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ambition is personal to each of us: what is all to one is
nothing to another and vice versa,

hugs n' love nessa

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