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Array ( [sid] => 180834 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unresolved Secrets Of The Mind [time] => 2015-03-24 01:15:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Telephone is ringing
driving me insane
and I am slowly starting to realize
that
everyday is the same,
in my mind
voices are whispering
letting me know
the stench of a lifetime
never really fades.

I'm just a shadow
another face in the crowd
hiding from the minions of evil
who drink from the blood
of cripple pilgrims as they drown,
off balance I exist in the life
staggering around dazed and confused
as the carousel spins me 'round and 'round.


I have a little drink
and a moment of regret
I think about it
as I smoke a cigarette...

Footsteps echo down the hall
breaking up the silence
here
in the prison I created
that I am living in,
there's a smell that lingers
that's driving me insane....

Roll call
I stand in line
and the nurse smiles
as she gives me my medicine,
there's a disturbance in the confusion
hope the meds kick in
before the emotional torture begins.
Muscles constrict
oh no
here we go again,
I'll think about
as I smoke another cigarrette.


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Unresolved Secrets Of The Mind

Contributed by UNKNOWN_UTOPIA on Tuesday, 24th March 2015 @ 01:15:45 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Telephone is ringing
driving me insane
and I am slowly starting to realize
that
everyday is the same,
in my mind
voices are whispering
letting me know
the stench of a lifetime
never really fades.

I'm just a shadow
another face in the crowd
hiding from the minions of evil
who drink from the blood
of cripple pilgrims as they drown,
off balance I exist in the life
staggering around dazed and confused
as the carousel spins me 'round and 'round.


I have a little drink
and a moment of regret
I think about it
as I smoke a cigarette...

Footsteps echo down the hall
breaking up the silence
here
in the prison I created
that I am living in,
there's a smell that lingers
that's driving me insane....

Roll call
I stand in line
and the nurse smiles
as she gives me my medicine,
there's a disturbance in the confusion
hope the meds kick in
before the emotional torture begins.
Muscles constrict
oh no
here we go again,
I'll think about
as I smoke another cigarrette.






Copyright © UNKNOWN_UTOPIA ... [ 2015-03-24 01:15:45]
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Re: Unresolved Secrets Of The Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 24th March 2015 @ 01:28:26 AM AEST
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Well hello there..
Good to see the real you back at it again.
Missed You.
emy




Re: Unresolved Secrets Of The Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Tuesday, 24th March 2015 @ 06:28:51 AM AEST
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That was different. Kind of reminds me of some of my earlier work. Good write. Keep on sharing.

Wayne


Re: Unresolved Secrets Of The Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 03:07:18 PM AEST
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a raw bite of reality, beautifully expressed,

hugs n' love nessa


Re: Unresolved Secrets Of The Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by irisblue on Saturday, 28th March 2015 @ 08:23:39 PM AEST
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I read this and it really drew me in, I like this, great poem.




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