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Done with respect
Anything I give you
I will never get

And so
I'm finished
Giving all for the sake of good
Considering all my kindness be raped if it could

I despise being treated like I'm typical
When everything I do is out of normal bounds
You could say it's straight eliptical

A round circumvention of running over
Taking out of my pockets while saying "bend over"
I will not be taken advantage of or for granted
When all this anger is now so deeply implanted

I refuse
To be anything but great
And so I respond to poor treatment
With an unquenchable hate

And so now you should know
Before I walk away and go
That you meant a lot to me
But now you're bitter misery [comments] => 5 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 6 [informant] => xHeathenx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Assuming the Position

Contributed by xHeathenx on Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 02:28:19 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I'm done with nice
Done with respect
Anything I give you
I will never get

And so
I'm finished
Giving all for the sake of good
Considering all my kindness be raped if it could

I despise being treated like I'm typical
When everything I do is out of normal bounds
You could say it's straight eliptical

A round circumvention of running over
Taking out of my pockets while saying "bend over"
I will not be taken advantage of or for granted
When all this anger is now so deeply implanted

I refuse
To be anything but great
And so I respond to poor treatment
With an unquenchable hate

And so now you should know
Before I walk away and go
That you meant a lot to me
But now you're bitter misery

Copyright © xHeathenx ... [ 2015-03-27 02:28:19]
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Re: Assuming the Position (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 12:50:49 PM AEST
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Hi there

Wow so much emotion brutal truth. This is a process you going through it will pass. As for the poem it self well penned. God bless

Greetings
Rus

Re: Assuming the Position (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 12:58:42 PM AEST
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This is an awesome, awesome poem! I too went through this and somehow still feel as if I am! Thank you for sharing this poem. Very well written, keep up the great work!

Wayne

Re: Assuming the Position (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 04:27:36 PM AEST
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beautifully expressed, honest and heartfelt, i just adore
that last stanza!

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Assuming the Position (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 06:11:50 PM AEST
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As a mere mortal as of yet only capable of good self poetry who just so happens by chanceo or if o am to believe the impossiible by magik has recently encountered this dilema you write of would like your honest opinion on my aim to achieve total understanding respect love and forgiveness .but I think that I am more at fault because I know that in order to feel offended I had pride and even if I knew better than to treat some one else as I had been treated I should have been happy to be a catalyst for others. I have had to learn the same way and some one else suffered so that I may feel regret as it played on my mind n feeling guilt that eventually increases empathy. I am still learning . He was also I feel a catalyst for me as is the other great poet on here' the one who talks of pale faces big arse n frogs.lol

Re: Assuming the Position (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Saturday, 28th March 2015 @ 01:53:51 PM AEST
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That's the way too write a poem
No study here. It came straight from your soul.
It flowed fast and strong. 5*

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