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Array ( [sid] => 180869 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => loaded pistols [time] => 2015-03-27 19:23:44 [hometext] => Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.~ Kahlil Gibran [bodytext] => paper
tell me
express
my meaning

I'm a signpost forest
waiting
to be
read

standing
waiting
a cathedral
of trees

or leaving
left unspoken
remain so

the expenditure
of words

cash me in
scream me out

whispers
my soul

never tell. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 73 [informant] => ming [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

loaded pistols

Contributed by ming on Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 07:23:44 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

paper
tell me
express
my meaning

I'm a signpost forest
waiting
to be
read

standing
waiting
a cathedral
of trees

or leaving
left unspoken
remain so

the expenditure
of words

cash me in
scream me out

whispers
my soul

never tell.

Copyright © ming ... [ 2015-03-27 19:23:44]
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Re: loaded pistols (User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 11:08:09 PM AEST
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Deep, thoughtful. I dig your words.

Best,

Fox

Re: loaded pistols (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 28th March 2015 @ 07:50:34 PM AEST
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or leaving left unspoken
remain so

interesting query for the soul
I like this a lot!

I'll have to read more work from you ming.

Peace!

Re: loaded pistols (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Sunday, 29th March 2015 @ 06:43:24 AM AEST
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Wow. The signpost forest is awesome. Waiting to be read, yet it would take so long to do so, that many would not care to try. Imagine reading a book or story in such a fashion. That would be quite fun. :)

A cathedral of trees. Something about that line is just awesome to me. A joyous and profound collection of individuals that are all unique, yet the same to some extent. Perhaps you are a forest of signposts, and the world is a cathedral, a giant collective of individual signposts all wanting to be read, yet not willing to look too far into each and every other forest. :)

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