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Array ( [sid] => 181073 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My tragic end [time] => 2015-04-30 01:25:25 [hometext] => Don't drink and drive [bodytext] => I got in a car one night
My life ended in unassuming fright
The car flipped over five or six times
Little spurts of flashes right before my eyes

Lets fast forward to the party before
Got drunk to settle the score
I didnt have no common sense
My friend let me leave 'cause I was tense

I started the car, took a bit of time
So drunk couldn't see in a straight line
Drove away with such great speed
Had to go, with all my willingness and need

Drove around the bend so fast
Couldn't see the lights the headbeams cast
They were blinding as I flipped over the hill
I was just a kid they didnt mean to kill

Flashback to the time I lay dying
On the bottom of the hill there's silence, no crying
I shouldn't have had a few to many
For because I did, my days have zeroed instead of being plenty [comments] => 3 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 66 [informant] => FireStarter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

My tragic end

Contributed by FireStarter on Thursday, 30th April 2015 @ 01:25:25 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

I got in a car one night
My life ended in unassuming fright
The car flipped over five or six times
Little spurts of flashes right before my eyes

Lets fast forward to the party before
Got drunk to settle the score
I didnt have no common sense
My friend let me leave 'cause I was tense

I started the car, took a bit of time
So drunk couldn't see in a straight line
Drove away with such great speed
Had to go, with all my willingness and need

Drove around the bend so fast
Couldn't see the lights the headbeams cast
They were blinding as I flipped over the hill
I was just a kid they didnt mean to kill

Flashback to the time I lay dying
On the bottom of the hill there's silence, no crying
I shouldn't have had a few to many
For because I did, my days have zeroed instead of being plenty

Copyright © FireStarter ... [ 2015-04-30 01:25:25]
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Re: My tragic end (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Friday, 1st May 2015 @ 02:01:17 AM AEST
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Not bad I thought this was a pretty good write. Could of worked on the cadence a bit though.

Re: My tragic end (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Friday, 1st May 2015 @ 08:08:29 PM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B

Re: My tragic end (User Rating: 1 )
by blknwht on Thursday, 13th August 2015 @ 07:38:03 AM AEST
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Its a good write indeed

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