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Array ( [sid] => 181250 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Take it away [time] => 2015-06-08 03:48:59 [hometext] => Another Freestyle [bodytext] => I don't know what I did to deserve this pain
But since I was a kid its been in my brain
Most people say that I'm just insane
But all I ever wanted was to feel the same

I haven't ever asked for much
Just to have someone to touch
Who will never hold a grudge
And not treat me like I'm sludge

I'm not asking for a lot
And I give it all I got
But you want to see me rot
All alone and just forgot

I don't know what else to say
I'm not loved in any way
No one cares if I decay
So won't you take it all away

Won't you take it all away?

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 48 [informant] => SuicidalSon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Take it away

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Monday, 8th June 2015 @ 03:48:59 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I don't know what I did to deserve this pain
But since I was a kid its been in my brain
Most people say that I'm just insane
But all I ever wanted was to feel the same

I haven't ever asked for much
Just to have someone to touch
Who will never hold a grudge
And not treat me like I'm sludge

I'm not asking for a lot
And I give it all I got
But you want to see me rot
All alone and just forgot

I don't know what else to say
I'm not loved in any way
No one cares if I decay
So won't you take it all away

Won't you take it all away?





Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2015-06-08 03:48:59]
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Re: Take it away (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 8th June 2015 @ 07:54:58 AM AEST
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Terrific angst
Get out and about and wash away the fear.....
Nice work!

James


Re: Take it away (User Rating: 1 )
by CandyAnn on Monday, 8th June 2015 @ 06:35:20 PM AEST
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This is a very touchy poem :/


Re: Take it away (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Tuesday, 9th June 2015 @ 08:13:58 AM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B




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