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Array ( [sid] => 181366 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Only. [time] => 2015-06-29 00:27:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Dream of a world that's only mine,

Where thoughts are holy,

And breath divine.

Dream of a world from-release of pain,

Where love is the sun

And healing the rain.

It's not that I'm selfish but passing through,

sometimes my world's not meant with you..

For I have survived the weakness of flesh,

The healing of mind and soul enmeshed.

For I am the moment,the breath of time,

My spirit the temple,my heart the chime.

With fatherly eyes of peace and seeing,

My world,my thoughts,my life my being

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Only.

Contributed by Northernlights on Monday, 29th June 2015 @ 12:27:55 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Dream of a world that's only mine,

Where thoughts are holy,

And breath divine.

Dream of a world from-release of pain,

Where love is the sun

And healing the rain.

It's not that I'm selfish but passing through,

sometimes my world's not meant with you..

For I have survived the weakness of flesh,

The healing of mind and soul enmeshed.

For I am the moment,the breath of time,

My spirit the temple,my heart the chime.

With fatherly eyes of peace and seeing,

My world,my thoughts,my life my being

Copyright © Northernlights ... [ 2015-06-29 00:27:55]
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Re: Only. (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 29th June 2015 @ 02:18:16 AM AEST
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this is sooo beautiful it is beyond words to describe, you
have captured what few poets can, this poem breathes
life, it is a masterpiece!

hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Only. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th June 2015 @ 10:40:09 AM AEST
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Wow, Anna !!! Just wow! It's all I've got for now. Tim

Re: Only. (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Monday, 29th June 2015 @ 08:21:07 PM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B

Re: Only. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th June 2015 @ 10:39:20 AM AEST
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Yes, the world is only ours alone. No matter how close we are to someone, we are always alone. No-one can jump in and share our thoughts, and we never share them in their entirety. We are the world for the that moment, that flash of light in all dark eternity, that we call life. Oh, that we should be released from pain, the sun be love and our healer the rain. I was lost in your poem. Sorry for rambling, but it crept into my psyche, and glad I was to let it in. Fine writing, indeed.

Re: Only. (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Friday, 3rd July 2015 @ 07:44:36 PM AEST
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I love how raw your writing is. Your words are such a reality. We all have this journey to hell and back and somedays you're put through the ringer so to take that time and want that time for yourself is great to hear. We need that or we lose sight of who we are and it's great writing old friend.

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