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x_x_x [bodytext] => My heart skips a beat every time I hear
you come near
I shake with fear
How much do you know?
How much of me
The true me
Do you see?
I couldn’t bear
For you to know
The pain I endear
The blood I make flow
I’m sorry I’ve lied
Told you everything’s okay
When truly deep down
I hate every day
I’m sorry I’ve pulled back
Out of your reach
I’m sorry I’ve lost track
I’ve fallen from the bridge
When everything is wrong
When I’ve given up hope
I never reach for you
I know you wouldn’t cope
Please understand
I’m doing this for you
Your innocent is priceless
I’m sorry you never knew
I’m sorry I draw back
Every time you take my hand
But now I’m lost
And I can’t be found
It’s safer to keep
Away from me
Than to see
What I really see
You don’t know what
Kind of hurt I’m going through
I’m sorry if this hurts you
But everything, it’s all true
One day I’ll show you
A part of this reality
But you’re safer for now
In your own fantasy
Please,
x forgive me x
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Keep Away

Contributed by afraid_of_fear on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



My heart skips a beat every time I hear
you come near
I shake with fear
How much do you know?
How much of me
The true me
Do you see?
I couldn’t bear
For you to know
The pain I endear
The blood I make flow
I’m sorry I’ve lied
Told you everything’s okay
When truly deep down
I hate every day
I’m sorry I’ve pulled back
Out of your reach
I’m sorry I’ve lost track
I’ve fallen from the bridge
When everything is wrong
When I’ve given up hope
I never reach for you
I know you wouldn’t cope
Please understand
I’m doing this for you
Your innocent is priceless
I’m sorry you never knew
I’m sorry I draw back
Every time you take my hand
But now I’m lost
And I can’t be found
It’s safer to keep
Away from me
Than to see
What I really see
You don’t know what
Kind of hurt I’m going through
I’m sorry if this hurts you
But everything, it’s all true
One day I’ll show you
A part of this reality
But you’re safer for now
In your own fantasy
Please,
x forgive me x




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Re: Keep Away (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 09:52:22 AM AEST
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this is a touching write, well done.
Michelle


Re: Keep Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 01:12:10 PM AEST
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moving a very good write
Shari


Re: Keep Away (User Rating: 1 )
by sideshowrunaway on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 01:16:55 PM AEST
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:( I know the feeling
sarah


Re: Keep Away (User Rating: 1 )
by sideshowrunaway on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 01:19:36 PM AEST
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:( I know the feeling
sarah


Re: Keep Away (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 05:53:49 PM AEST
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char...this is beautiful...is it, i don't know...is it about me and em, or your parents? beautiful...


Re: Keep Away (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 06:10:00 PM AEST
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this was long but u kept it fresh throughout. I hope you hang in there and use this as an outlet. Once again a great poem.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Keep Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Ember on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 06:20:30 PM AEST
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great poem but it sounds like ur in pain hope things get better


Re: Keep Away (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 02:35:58 PM AEST
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It was written a long time ago.. or at least it feels like it.. to my mum, who i love so much, but now it's all too late - she knows nearly everything now, and we're getting so far apart.. i've never felt like this before, we've always been so close...


Re: Keep Away (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 06:41:12 PM AEST
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wow, this poem touched me, I've been there believe me, it's hard, but a new day will come. PM me if u need to talk. Luv ya lotz-Lisa


Re: Keep Away (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 07:45:32 AM AEST
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Nice one charlotte ! :)




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