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[aid] => mick
[title] => Bills
[time] => 2015-07-20 18:36:13
[hometext] => Just the truth
[bodytext] => Bills
None today would be thrilling
Bills
They suck
Bills
I pay them when I'm eating
Bills
So incredibly financially defeating
Bills
They suck
Bills
An app to this eat that doesn't make it easier
Bills
They still sink my asset-o-meter
Bills
They suck
Bills
What's the catch? There are none today
Bills
Always some down the line we have to pay
Bills
They suck
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Bills
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
on
Monday, 20th July 2015 @ 06:36:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Bills
None today would be thrilling
Bills
They suck
Bills
I pay them when I'm eating
Bills
So incredibly financially defeating
Bills
They suck
Bills
An app to this eat that doesn't make it easier
Bills
They still sink my asset-o-meter
Bills
They suck
Bills
What's the catch? There are none today
Bills
Always some down the line we have to pay
Bills
They suck
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Re: Bills
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 20th July 2015 @ 09:43:32 PM AEST
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This came at a great time for me.
Interesting write indeed.
A couple weeks in ICU costs over $200K
Insurance pays 80% but............
Anyway thanks for sharing my pain. |
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Re: Bills
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st July 2015 @ 12:07:41 AM AEST
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Ain't it the truth!!! Loved reading this!
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: Bills
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 21st July 2015 @ 08:42:15 AM AEST
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Isnt this the truth. But the sad truth of the matter is...they never stop. If it isnt one thing it is something else. Nice write. I share your pain
Rich |
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Re: Bills
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by xHeathenx on
Tuesday, 21st July 2015 @ 09:53:50 AM AEST
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I'm not a fan of things like repetition in the case of "bills, they suck", as to me repetition often is something a baseline or riff in music that lends a sort of rhythm or groove to the collective whole, but will say it fits the write here in that it is a never ending cycle.
I'm not quite there in terms of relating to the write, as my situation fortunately enough doesn't have any bills but rent, cell phone, and internet. Luckily I have my utilities included in my apartment's rent. I willl say that debt in any case sucks and isn't fun, and it's nice to relate to another person on something, despite it being trivial matters. :)
Keep on writing the good write. :) |
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Re: Bills
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 21st July 2015 @ 03:45:24 PM AEST
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simple, to the point rhyme, i've always thought if i didn't
have any for a year i'd be in great shape!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Bills
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by speedy on
Tuesday, 21st July 2015 @ 04:04:46 PM AEST
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Hear, hear.
Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: Bills
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th July 2015 @ 10:08:02 PM AEST
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Oh them bills
Who could not relate
The kind reminders
Of the smallest ones of all
That tell us
We are here
We are here
It is all about cash flow of course
And we all only want to stay in the black
On into the future
Wagging our tails
Like my dog Blue does when I
Give him a good treat
It induces such a lovely stress free calm
Blue eat this Bill boy I say
And I know he would if he could
Peace!
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Re: Bills
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th July 2015 @ 10:14:56 PM AEST
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Oh them bills
Who could not relate
The kind reminders
Of the smallest ones of all
That tell us
We are here
We are here
It is all about cash flow of course
And we all only want to stay in the black
On into the future
Wagging our tails
Like my dog Blue does when I
Give him a good treat
It induces such a lovely stress free calm
Blue eat this Bill boy I say
And I know he would if he could
Peace!
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Re: Bills
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by softerware on
Sunday, 26th July 2015 @ 12:36:27 PM AEST
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This should be a song!
My taxman once told me that the money I make from Jan-Jun goes to pay taxes. Since I don't make any money until July, I try not to work too hard until it rolls around!.
It is quite amazing what we can do without when we have to cut back. If you didn't choose to pay your internet provider---we wouldn't be reading your complaint against the bill they send you. Ironic, isn't it!
softerware |
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Re: Bills
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by Archie on
Monday, 31st August 2015 @ 05:55:30 PM AEST
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I agree
You have an interesting style
Your message in this poem is cool though |
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