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This can't be life i am sure
Just throw in the towel
Where are the referees Please call a foul
My pockets is flappin
Cuz there is nothin in there to keep them from clappin
My names not bugs but I got them bunnies
No monies and no hunnies
But I still have all the bills
Someone please help me help me write my will
They say bills come every 30days
seems every day is the 30th I'm caught in a haze
As I sit back and light my blaze
Counting my days
Before my time is up
My life sucks YUP
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YUP

Contributed by Jeriku on Tuesday, 28th July 2015 @ 01:47:24 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I don't wanna go on no more
This can't be life i am sure
Just throw in the towel
Where are the referees Please call a foul
My pockets is flappin
Cuz there is nothin in there to keep them from clappin
My names not bugs but I got them bunnies
No monies and no hunnies
But I still have all the bills
Someone please help me help me write my will
They say bills come every 30days
seems every day is the 30th I'm caught in a haze
As I sit back and light my blaze
Counting my days
Before my time is up
My life sucks YUP

Copyright © Jeriku ... [ 2015-07-28 13:47:24]
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Re: YUP (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Wednesday, 29th July 2015 @ 04:03:19 PM AEST
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Good write.

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Re: YUP (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Thursday, 30th July 2015 @ 06:29:30 PM AEST
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This is the poem of a young man who resents that life must be earned. About to turn the corner having found out that he is not content with left-overs and hand outs, and blaming it on fate doesn't change the outcome.
Your life, your fate, your fortunes whatever you call them..are a product of your own design. Give nothing-get nothing. Simple.
Nice write. Great message.
softerware

Re: YUP (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 24th August 2015 @ 10:09:35 PM AEST
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. . .I think I shall break precedence here.I disagree with Softerware if one person fails the community fails. We have to fight for that community and that means helping our young people to take flight.

. . .how to budget
. . .how to build skills
. . .how to grocery shop and cook etc.

Then they will not be drawn by the pitfalls that wait to entrench them.

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