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Array ( [sid] => 18152 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => the power of the angels [time] => 2003-05-28 14:05:00 [hometext] => hi,i wrote this as my mum in law has recently passed and i know it can be hard in such times,hopefully i think this will ease the pain a little for anyone who reads it.
I have been recommended by many to attempt to get my poetry published so i would very much appreciate any feedback on any poems i write,thanks!! [bodytext] => A tear falls down from heaven,
and lands upon my face,
an invisable hold around my heart,
warming the bitter empty space.
The sun pushes through the clouds,
and forces a smile upon my lips,
as i stand there in the warmest rain,
dripping softly onto my fingertips.
A rainbow developes in the grim grey sky,
Bringing joy to my oh so sad heart,
a painting done by the angels above,
the most marvelous and greatest of art.
the wonder of earth all around me,
and the wonders of god up above,
bringing a present from all those angels,
a present so great,its love.
by Shelley Trickett
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 39 [informant] => gothgal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
the power of the angels

Contributed by gothgal on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



A tear falls down from heaven,
and lands upon my face,
an invisable hold around my heart,
warming the bitter empty space.
The sun pushes through the clouds,
and forces a smile upon my lips,
as i stand there in the warmest rain,
dripping softly onto my fingertips.
A rainbow developes in the grim grey sky,
Bringing joy to my oh so sad heart,
a painting done by the angels above,
the most marvelous and greatest of art.
the wonder of earth all around me,
and the wonders of god up above,
bringing a present from all those angels,
a present so great,its love.
by Shelley Trickett




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Re: the power of the angels (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 02:26:15 PM AEST
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this is very beautiful... touching... blessings...


Re: the power of the angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Rage on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 02:35:56 PM AEST
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Wow, wonderfully done. Beautiful string of words you've pulled here. I'm taken away by the beauty you've created here. Very well done.

Happier Dayz,
~*~RAGE~*~


Re: the power of the angels (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 05:08:10 PM AEST
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beautiful...


Re: the power of the angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Ember on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 05:54:28 PM AEST
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another great write by you keep it up


Re: the power of the angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 08:31:10 PM AEST
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very beautiful
Shari


Re: the power of the angels (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 11:55:47 PM AEST
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Shelly sad but a beautiful poem,I lost my mother 2 years ago the pains still there!
Very touching! Christina


Re: the power of the angels (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 05:40:15 AM AEST
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Aw that's really touching! I'm very sorry for your loss. Beautiful poem. Blessed be,

~ Moonlit


Re: the power of the angels (User Rating: 1 )
by gothgal on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 04:05:48 PM AEST
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hi,just thought i would say thanks to all of you that took the time to not only read but post a comment aswell about my poem.its nice to feel that peple can associate to my poem and my feelings..thankyou :)




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