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Array ( [sid] => 18160 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => to my Goddess [time] => 2003-05-28 18:05:00 [hometext] => an ode to my wife. strangely enough, there is nothing really morbid in this write. i guess i'm getting soft. [bodytext] => like an aura of starlight
you stand, defiant, at the heart of midnight

in Winter's dress, you still glow with warmth
your lips giving life to the roses

like the sea, so deep and full of mystery
helplessly, i'm drawn to you

a bipolar Goddess, both benign and malignant
even Death at your hands would feel like a kiss

at your breast, i've found heaven
your arms around me, never letting me fall

above it all you soar, bewitching, irresistible
with a heart too pure for this world

beneath you i crawl, an insect
praying for the blessing of Death
'neath your perfumed foot

painting your dark rainbow of love
across the moonlit sky
and i will always chase that rainbow
ever hoping to kiss those lips once more [comments] => 6 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

to my Goddess

Contributed by Cancer on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

like an aura of starlight
you stand, defiant, at the heart of midnight

in Winter's dress, you still glow with warmth
your lips giving life to the roses

like the sea, so deep and full of mystery
helplessly, i'm drawn to you

a bipolar Goddess, both benign and malignant
even Death at your hands would feel like a kiss

at your breast, i've found heaven
your arms around me, never letting me fall

above it all you soar, bewitching, irresistible
with a heart too pure for this world

beneath you i crawl, an insect
praying for the blessing of Death
'neath your perfumed foot

painting your dark rainbow of love
across the moonlit sky
and i will always chase that rainbow
ever hoping to kiss those lips once more

Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2003-05-28 18:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: to my Goddess (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 08:07:02 PM AEST
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very beautiful.. I like this softer side
Shari

Re: to my Goddess (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 06:22:35 AM AEST
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Very beautiful.. very beautiful.. venkat

Re: to my Goddess (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 06:22:46 AM AEST
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Very beautiful.. very beautiful.. venkat

Re: to my Goddess (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 01:58:59 PM AEST
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if this is 'getting soft', then i wish more guys would feel this way. this write has all the beautiful imagery that make your darker poems so intense and the emotions revealed seem genuine and are eloquently expressed. she sounds perfect, surely you've found your reason to live? keep them coming, Kate x

Re: to my Goddess (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 05:11:09 PM AEST
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I liked this Roy just as great as your 'morbid' ones very descriptive I especially liked the last stanza. once again great.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: to my Goddess (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 08:50:57 PM AEST
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i love both sides of your heart.......tender ........beautiful......dark and hateful.........awesome talent!!!!!!!!

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