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Almost like you're one of the dead
Is it merely that you just don't care
Or is it that your head
Is filled with thin air
I can't figure you out
You have as much feeling as
A dead trout
A kind word is something
You never spout about
So much fun
You are clinically numb
I guess your trapped feelings
Is a skill all of its own
And those that stand before you
Are all just dumb
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Clinically Numb

Contributed by jamesstockdale on Monday, 12th October 2015 @ 10:17:58 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

I can't seem to get into your head
Almost like you're one of the dead
Is it merely that you just don't care
Or is it that your head
Is filled with thin air
I can't figure you out
You have as much feeling as
A dead trout
A kind word is something
You never spout about
So much fun
You are clinically numb
I guess your trapped feelings
Is a skill all of its own
And those that stand before you
Are all just dumb

Copyright © jamesstockdale ... [ 2015-10-12 10:17:58]
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Re: Clinically Numb (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Monday, 12th October 2015 @ 04:10:12 PM AEST
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Something very much relatable. I have the feeling trying to reason with people on youtube, who can't accept the fact you don't like something that they do, and when you try to exain that it's opinion and you're free to say it, they explode at the mouth like they accidentally drank fire ants. Lol

Nicely done James. :)

Re: Clinically Numb (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th October 2015 @ 02:23:37 AM AEST
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You have as much feeling as A dead trout lol...my favorite line. I love the way you laid it on in this one. Thanks, Tim

Re: Clinically Numb (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Tuesday, 13th October 2015 @ 10:33:55 PM AEST
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Awesome!! Blunt to the point!! and I can totally relate to this myself!!
Keep writing and sharing always!!
Peace
Str8 Sav

Re: Clinically Numb (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Thursday, 15th October 2015 @ 08:37:05 PM AEST
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"I guess your trapped feelings
Is a skill all of its own
And those that stand before you
Are all just dumb"

THAT'S the poem....right there.

Awesomely done.

Invierno

Re: Clinically Numb (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Wednesday, 21st October 2015 @ 11:43:41 PM AEST
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you are right it is a skill
very annoying isn't it.........

Re: Clinically Numb (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 4th November 2015 @ 05:18:42 AM AEST
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you have truly captured this persons essence, brilliant writing,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Clinically Numb (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th September 2020 @ 06:43:11 AM AEST
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//// This may be listed in anguish but man, it`s oh so dripping with sarcasm!!! Man, one of my favorites by you!!! Actually, there`s too many to choose from but still, this rocks.

I still love that "You have as much feeling as a dead trout!!! I gotta remember that.

Thanks, Jimmy!!!

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