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Array ( [sid] => 182076 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just Don't: [time] => 2015-11-07 16:49:23 [hometext] => So many of our friends beleive they are the center of our world and they need to know they are not. [bodytext] => I don't mind
you taking things from me.
I don't mind
you violating my rights
I don't mind
you even lying to me
I even don't mind
you don't want to fight.
I do mind
you don't love me out right.

I don't mind
you laughing at me,
I don't mind
you playing all these
games with me
I do mind
all these excuses
My life just don't
revolve around you.
ok [comments] => 4 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 48 [informant] => RICHARD_CAMPBELL [notes] => Edited as requested, for spelling. Moderator_18 Nov 8, 2015 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Just Don't:

Contributed by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 04:49:23 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I don't mind
you taking things from me.
I don't mind
you violating my rights
I don't mind
you even lying to me
I even don't mind
you don't want to fight.
I do mind
you don't love me out right.

I don't mind
you laughing at me,
I don't mind
you playing all these
games with me
I do mind
all these excuses
My life just don't
revolve around you.
ok

Copyright © RICHARD_CAMPBELL ... [ 2015-11-07 16:49:23]
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Re: Just Don't: (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 05:10:26 PM AEST
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they certainly are not

Re: Just Don't: (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 08:38:43 PM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B

Re: Just Don't: (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 10:46:49 PM AEST
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Well said Richard!
I have to feel sorry for people who have such a sense of entitlement. It comes sorrowful to know that we are not the center of the universe. A lesson we should have learned in kindergarten by having to share with others, is a terrible blow when you are 30 something!
If no one needs you; what is your worth?
To many, it is too difficult to answer. They will seek people who are unable to be alone, to be necessary to someone. It is a lock and key relationship.
Your poem has told the story so clearly. softerware

Re: Just Don't: (User Rating: 1 )
by thomasu01 on Sunday, 8th November 2015 @ 05:19:04 AM AEST
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I like this how true in some relation ships too.

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