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Array ( [sid] => 18235 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Roses Red [time] => 2003-05-30 01:05:00 [hometext] => I wrote this for my friend who's boyfriend after 2 years just broke up with her. [bodytext] => My love for you
Like a field of roses red
The sun never ceasing to shine
Never forgetting the words we’ve said.

But now the clouds are rolling in
The turmoil outside is reaching within
One simple phrase escapes from your lips
A tear slides down through a farewell kiss

Lightening strikes in my field of flowers
I lay inside myself, crying for hours.
How could all our love so quickly disappear?
Everything is now gone, our plans for all the years.

I loved you for so long
And I know you loved me too.
Might there be something wrong with me?
Am I no longer good enough for you?

The clouds swirl through my mind
Tornadoes run through my head.
I sadly look upon my field
Now of roses dead.

But clouds come and clouds pass.
The rain that falls will grow the grass
So don’t mourn now because your love is gone.
Be happy now because he loved you for so long.

And watch your brand new roses grow
Like the flowers that peek after every snow
The rain now will grow back your roses again.
And through the frustration of the moment
You will finally win.
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Roses Red

Contributed by BlackFire9786 on Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



My love for you
Like a field of roses red
The sun never ceasing to shine
Never forgetting the words we’ve said.

But now the clouds are rolling in
The turmoil outside is reaching within
One simple phrase escapes from your lips
A tear slides down through a farewell kiss

Lightening strikes in my field of flowers
I lay inside myself, crying for hours.
How could all our love so quickly disappear?
Everything is now gone, our plans for all the years.

I loved you for so long
And I know you loved me too.
Might there be something wrong with me?
Am I no longer good enough for you?

The clouds swirl through my mind
Tornadoes run through my head.
I sadly look upon my field
Now of roses dead.

But clouds come and clouds pass.
The rain that falls will grow the grass
So don’t mourn now because your love is gone.
Be happy now because he loved you for so long.

And watch your brand new roses grow
Like the flowers that peek after every snow
The rain now will grow back your roses again.
And through the frustration of the moment
You will finally win.




Copyright © BlackFire9786 ... [ 2003-05-30 01:05:00]
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Re: Roses Red (User Rating: 1 )
by Annie on Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 01:10:01 AM AEST
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This is a good poem.. sad..


Re: Roses Red (User Rating: 1 )
by Annie on Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 01:10:03 AM AEST
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This is a good poem.. sad..


Re: Roses Red (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 01:18:48 AM AEST
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breathtakingly beautiful poem:) ~hugs nessa


Re: Roses Red (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 07:37:53 AM AEST
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This is sad, breath taking, inspirational all at the same time. A great piece of writing.

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