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Sunrises and Oil Plumes
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Sunday, 13th March 2016 @ 05:50:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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The canvas tears as the horizon
Spews forth primordial oils
Dark blue nestled with faint
Orange, reds, and yellows
The silhouette of the wide open,
Land lifting up the clouds
Three metal spires form,
Sequential calls to space
Headlights, glowing in the distance
Beauty, the path of least resistance
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xHeathenx
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2016-03-13 05:50:14]
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Re: Sunrises and Oil Plumes
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 13th March 2016 @ 12:23:02 PM AEST
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I can/'/t honestly say I get it but it is very well written and the visual impact is excellent.
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Re: Sunrises and Oil Plumes
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 13th March 2016 @ 12:37:13 PM AEST
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Well done, M. I like the beginning quite a bit. /'/primordial oils/'/...good stuff.
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Re: Sunrises and Oil Plumes
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2016 @ 02:42:54 AM AEST
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//It/'/s awesome when a poet paints with words and I have witnessed that here.
Thank you,
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