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Array ( [sid] => 182908 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lyrical Mindwarp [time] => 2016-04-09 15:24:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This latest situation
has pushed me to the edge
keeping me awake
eyes wide open
and moaning in the bed,
mentally murdering me
in my alone time
leaving me so lyrically of balance
that my flows are hard to define.

As my world slowly crumbles
my inner visions bombard me with anger
overwhelming me emotionally
my life has been shattered,
my mental condition is on suspension
so I am not sure if what I say matters
and I do not know
if I ever felt sadder.

I am lyrically trying to solve the problems
but
the warp in my mental is causing Illusions
making it hard to solve them,
there is no prognosis
to help me focus
off balance I bend...
I wonder if life smokes a cigarette
after it bucks me once again. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 75 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Lyrical Mindwarp

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 9th April 2016 @ 03:24:41 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

This latest situation
has pushed me to the edge
keeping me awake
eyes wide open
and moaning in the bed,
mentally murdering me
in my alone time
leaving me so lyrically of balance
that my flows are hard to define.

As my world slowly crumbles
my inner visions bombard me with anger
overwhelming me emotionally
my life has been shattered,
my mental condition is on suspension
so I am not sure if what I say matters
and I do not know
if I ever felt sadder.

I am lyrically trying to solve the problems
but
the warp in my mental is causing Illusions
making it hard to solve them,
there is no prognosis
to help me focus
off balance I bend...
I wonder if life smokes a cigarette
after it bucks me once again.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2016-04-09 15:24:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lyrical Mindwarp (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Sunday, 10th April 2016 @ 10:25:41 AM AEST
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I think in your writing you were able to capture sadness. The feeling of being lost and not sure where to turn. Showing the challenge and everyday fight to be happy when it/'/s easy to spiral. Pouring out thoughts and lyrics, trying to solve the riddle of why is this happening. Hopefully today is better. Thanks for sharing

Re: Lyrical Mindwarp (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 14th April 2016 @ 09:56:56 AM AEST
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i am in a pit myself and your beautiful poem touched and
warmed my heart, thank you for sharing my friend,

hugs n love nessa

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