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alas, we are stardust
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Thursday, 14th April 2016 @ 02:39:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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bottle notes foundered trapped at sea
shattered along the ocean shores, and
like all freedom of expression, the notes
now free once more- o for surely we are
made of stardust, whilst bits and pieces
yet remain- tiny fragments of a life once
lived scattered on the wind again- like a
lonely set: the bones who wrote refrains-
timeless tales of sweetest life n melodies-
once cherished symphony of words- love
truelove lives forevermore forever darling
then dissipates in the winds and realms of
time- unless one heart be true to memory
then the dead, the ghosts- they are once
more alive- ever tides still lows and highs
♥
) *
(. (..✿.✿
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Re: alas, we are stardust
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th April 2016 @ 10:49:25 PM AEST
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there is a wonderful painting here
a view of words on canvas
images in the foreground
telling me something I must
never forget
alas we are stardust
I love the way you framed this
it lives as though I must take it
with me wherever I go
A+ perfect prose!
Peace!
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Re: alas, we are stardust
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th April 2016 @ 03:10:25 AM AEST
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"In the wind they/'/re still alive."
Another great one, Nessa.
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Re: alas, we are stardust
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Friday, 15th April 2016 @ 01:30:40 PM AEST
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some how time will remember our words,
even if its written on paper people still get
its value.what an awrsome poem.thank for sharing this beautiful poem excellent. |
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Re: alas, we are stardust
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by softerware on
Friday, 15th April 2016 @ 08:21:31 PM AEST
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Your poem is etherial and gossamer as you weave emotions into a tapestry and release it to "dissipate in the winds and realms of time".
Your eternal gift of hope that " one heart be true to memory" shall bring alive the loves of yesteryear to dwell in our hearts again, is a message I will keep in my heart forever..on the chance that you are right, I will try to love with all my might.
Such is the gift your words have given me.
softerware
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Re: alas, we are stardust
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 18th April 2016 @ 03:34:26 PM AEST
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Softerware said it better than I ever could.
Again something I can relate to.
A beautiful poem that touched me.
Thank you.
James
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