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Waiting
Contributed by
flex4life13
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Monday, 18th April 2016 @ 05:47:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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keep them waiting, a sun too must burst
once its shedding is complete, a giants untimely curse.
Shant you share what you had with me,
dont you dare be glad when you set me free.
Will you recall a moment we never shared?
Will you stall once the torment, it is spared?
A tiny speck, fragment of yesterday,
deposited at my door, odorless decay.
Keep them waiting, save the best for last,
once the poison is at my feet, once you drop your glass.
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Re: Waiting
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by duff on
Monday, 18th April 2016 @ 09:25:00 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed the suspense you created. It builds and builds with layers. Mysterious and very interesting |
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