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She to his He
Contributed by
softerware
on
Saturday, 14th May 2016 @ 09:47:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Men dont believe theyre heros; You have to tell them so; Youre the mirror of their worth They look to you to know.
There is no magic formula; They are what you believe; Give them hope and they will cope; Tho Hell should grab their sleeve.
Hell stand and fight to prove you right; Hell try to win it all; To hear you say although he fails; He never stood so tall.
You are his identity; The teller of his tales; The author of his chivalry; The wind upon his sails.
He needs someone to need him; And you someone to care; There never was a hero; Without a lady fair!
Every woman ever loved has gifted man her fates; And all she did was understand; the love he kept in wait.
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softerware
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2016-05-14 21:47:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: She to his He
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 14th May 2016 @ 09:59:43 PM AEST (User
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Wonderful poem Jaye...
But you are old school. Most women unfortunately no longer subscribe to that kind of thinking. Who has the time when we need to show the world another useless selfie from yet another angle?
Men don/'/t care much either to do the little things that make women happy. It/'/s a me-me world.
Your poems are always unique and educational. That/'/s why I like to watch old movies. Men and women knew how to act and what real romance was all about.
Bravo
James |
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Re: She to his He
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th May 2016 @ 09:12:41 AM AEST (User
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I take James/'/s point, but I/'/m old school too, and I understand the formula so well. Without a fair lady, a lot of men would be standing on very unstable foundations.Women have an understanding of men that is not fully reciprocated. Usual style and wisdom, of course. |
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Re: She to his He
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th May 2016 @ 10:30:37 PM AEST (User
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Man this is good. I/'/m gonna have to send this to my wife. This is really good. I enjoyed it |
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Re: She to his He
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Thursday, 19th May 2016 @ 10:39:42 AM AEST (User
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James is correct, though with poems like your, it will touch people and remind them of the correct path of happiness.
As always, content spot on, and style, flow, etc is sheer perfection.
You should have worked for Hallmark. You would have been their star.
I LOVE the poem and endorse it 100%.
Mike |
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