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THOSE MOMENTS WHEN WE CRIED
Contributed by
hray42
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Sunday, 29th May 2016 @ 04:21:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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those who will listen
are those who want it, or those who need it
i am talking in my sleep these nights,
and it is because i love you
i am picking up the pieces of myself
so that i may keep moving forward
our days spent together, and in warm arms
have left me totally blue
our shadows can now dance alone
under the faint glow of moonlit air
i will think of you fondly,
and will always yearn for the smell of your lovely hair
those eyes, they will search to haunt me
and that smile will forever remain
i will dance our dance eternal
as we did under cover, and in the rain
and in the loneliest of my times
when i still wish you by my side
i will come to love our laughter
and embrace those moments when we cried...
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hray42
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2016-05-29 16:21:08]
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Re: THOSE MOMENTS WHEN WE CRIED
(User Rating: 1 )
by LadyCC on
Monday, 30th May 2016 @ 02:05:02 AM AEST
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Dear hray42
Oh wow!
Known the feeling all too well for too long.
Beautifully penned.
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Re: THOSE MOMENTS WHEN WE CRIED
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 24th June 2016 @ 06:31:26 PM AEST
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A beautiful swirl of images, tied together with the string of a great and poignant ending.
Painted with powerful simplicity.
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