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Pieces here...
Pieces there -
The pieces of my life,
Seems to be everywhere.

How did I become so broken...
Shattered shards,
Of all my dreams -
There is nothing left of me.
It seems.

Wrong turns,
Bad decisions...
I look back and just cannot fathom -
Why did I allow my soul,
To be held ransom?

There is a ray of hope though...
Something to keep what/'/s left of me together -
Someone to hold my hand,
On the road to recovery forever!

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A Ray Of Hope....

Contributed by LadyCC on Monday, 6th June 2016 @ 02:17:25 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

06-06-2016....

Pieces here...
Pieces there -
The pieces of my life,
Seems to be everywhere.

How did I become so broken...
Shattered shards,
Of all my dreams -
There is nothing left of me.
It seems.

Wrong turns,
Bad decisions...
I look back and just cannot fathom -
Why did I allow my soul,
To be held ransom?

There is a ray of hope though...
Something to keep what/'/s left of me together -
Someone to hold my hand,
On the road to recovery forever!

LadyCC

Copyright © LadyCC ... [ 2016-06-06 14:17:25]
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Re: A Ray Of Hope.... (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Monday, 6th June 2016 @ 02:29:41 PM AEST
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Dear LadyCC

I feel you girl beautiful write. Hold on to that ray of hope. God bless

Greetings
Rus

Re: A Ray Of Hope.... (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 7th June 2016 @ 07:32:40 PM AEST
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getting back up after falling
down
always gives that feeling of hope,
thanx for sharing.

Re: A Ray Of Hope.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th June 2016 @ 12:19:37 AM AEST
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I love this poem
it could apply to
so many struggles
to so many different
type of folk,
and to stop and think
of all the pieces
in all the places
searching only
for the one real
Ray, just a glimpse

Perfect poem!

Thank you!
Peace!

Re: A Ray Of Hope.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 24th June 2016 @ 06:44:48 PM AEST
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There is always hope, even in the darkest of times.
We just have to remember to look for it, not dismiss it as folly.
Lovely write

Steve

Re: A Ray Of Hope.... (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Sunday, 10th July 2016 @ 03:04:17 AM AEST
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Dearest LadyCC

As you know I/'/ve just finished watching Game of thrones. Now I know its just a story, however there is much that relates to this peace of yours. Take Reek for example he was Lord Theon, he was broken down by Lord Ramsey. Then there is Lady Arya she also went through a lot seeing her farther beheaded her home burnt down and her mom, brothers also murdered. Now Theon chose to give up and rightfuly so, what he went through and no one to hold his hand and help him be strong. Now on the other hand Lady Arya she faught back, but the difference is she had someone to hold her hand, that ray of hope (light) When I look at you I see Lady Arya, not so brutal and cold but as strong willed as she is, not prepared to lie down and give up. One can not help but reach out to you and hold your hand. What we need to remember is that one can only help those that want to be helped. You can say Theon had no one to hold his hand and you would be right, initially it was so, but later on people wanted to help him and he shyed away. Whereas Arya she is fighting like mad to stay sane and revenge her family. I/'/ve read this piece a few times now and I must comment again. Very beautiful and powerful message in this piece. God bless love

Greetings
Rus

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