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Array ( [sid] => 183423 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Cooling [time] => 2016-08-05 21:09:39 [hometext] => a small write a friend and I finished so long ago...a small song clip and lyric we finished this month. thank you my friend... [bodytext] => the cooling.[way back when]

remember a night soft thoughts were ours
talks of far away places...if only can rise.

That minute we were swift and sure,
a fire made the desert look small.
Heat shimmers rise joining tinseled sounds,
and leaves giving to wind...

I am yours completely at ths breath,
and always I have your word ,
I will carry through time....
memory rides a nameless wind,
the desert take nothing but what We leave behind.

Here We will lie"...secrets or claim...
We were lost between dreams.. and the cooling..
a breath and a need..
Vincent/Shelby

"Grace always pours from a closing wound"
© Copyright 2016 Vincent. All Rights Reserved.


written this month..hear it here https://vimeo.com/177779212

every once in awhile
every now and then..
takes Me away...lets me back in...


and I remember a night
"we were carried away
when We were lost between dreams
and the cooling...We were lost between dreams
.a breath..and a need...

Vincent / Clay
© Copyright 2016 Vincent. All Rights Reserved. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 419 [topic] => 21 [informant] => crow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
The Cooling

Contributed by crow on Friday, 5th August 2016 @ 09:09:39 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



the cooling.[way back when]

remember a night soft thoughts were ours
talks of far away places...if only can rise.

That minute we were swift and sure,
a fire made the desert look small.
Heat shimmers rise joining tinseled sounds,
and leaves giving to wind...

I am yours completely at ths breath,
and always I have your word ,
I will carry through time....
memory rides a nameless wind,
the desert take nothing but what We leave behind.

Here We will lie"...secrets or claim...
We were lost between dreams.. and the cooling..
a breath and a need..
Vincent/Shelby

"Grace always pours from a closing wound"
© Copyright 2016 Vincent. All Rights Reserved.


written this month..hear it here https://vimeo.com/177779212

every once in awhile
every now and then..
takes Me away...lets me back in...


and I remember a night
"we were carried away
when We were lost between dreams
and the cooling...We were lost between dreams
.a breath..and a need...

Vincent / Clay
© Copyright 2016 Vincent. All Rights Reserved.




Copyright © crow ... [ 2016-08-05 21:09:39]
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Re: The Cooling (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 9th August 2016 @ 04:40:38 AM AEST
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pretty:) hugs n love nessa


Re: The Cooling (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Saturday, 20th August 2016 @ 02:16:08 PM AEST
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Nicely done. I can relate. Some memories never become undone. . .


Re: The Cooling (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 6th September 2016 @ 01:09:49 PM AEST
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Great poem Lane!
I enjoyed it!

James




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