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[sid] => 183431
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[aid] => mick
[title] => if haunted
[time] => 2016-08-09 13:52:00
[hometext] => It is not in the stars to hold our destiny but in ourselves. ~William Shakespeare
[bodytext] => the future is round
cells made of cells
made of cells
filled with star dust
and stories (and the
morning dove lies)
past is future is past
is present is future
is past is present
as the night bathes
us in velvet indigo.
[comments] => 7
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[informant] => ming
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if haunted
Contributed by
ming
on
Tuesday, 9th August 2016 @ 01:52:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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the future is round
cells made of cells
made of cells
filled with star dust
and stories (and the
morning dove lies)
past is future is past
is present is future
is past is present
as the night bathes
us in velvet indigo.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2016-08-09 13:52:00] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: if haunted
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ravisada on
Wednesday, 10th August 2016 @ 04:19:27 AM AEST (User
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Excellent. |
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Re: if haunted
(User Rating: 1 ) by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 10th August 2016 @ 03:30:17 PM AEST (User
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Hi there
Reminds me of the movie Stardust one of my favorites
Nice one
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: if haunted
(User Rating: 1 ) by LadyCC on
Wednesday, 17th August 2016 @ 02:01:24 PM AEST (User
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How accurate and hauntingly true this rings!
...past is future is past
is present is future
is past is present...
Love,
XxCCxX |
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Re: if haunted
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Saturday, 20th August 2016 @ 12:09:37 AM AEST (User
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How magical is eternity. Ever replicating, cells made of cells, made of cells...
We are dust caught in a vortex of futures that repeat the past. tiny insignificant but wondrous specs of being in a cold cosmos.
You have described this so deftly that the title is unnecessary to the work itself. We need no cues to follow you! You have written us a trail of stardust.
softerware |
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Re: if haunted
(User Rating: 1 ) by elle on
Saturday, 20th August 2016 @ 02:06:31 PM AEST (User
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Surrounded by, immersed in, a timeless energy that reveals itself to each of us, in our own turn. Cheers my friend. Echos of echos, echoing. . . |
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Re: if haunted
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 28th August 2016 @ 01:58:47 AM AEST (User
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ahh being bathe in velvet indigo,
perfect.... |
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Re: if haunted
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th September 2016 @ 08:17:54 AM AEST (User
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You write wonderful poetry. Little, abstract beauties. That third stanza is a delight to read- again and again! Thanks for sharing.
~Scorp
(Forever haunted) |
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