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We are all in control
But some people always want to control you
Keep to your path
Each new day is a brand new start
Like each rumble in your tummy
Could lead to a smelly fart

Own the day, in a constructive way
If it is rainy or sunny
Think of something funny and smile
Cos everyone gets the blues
So take the red ones too
Come out of the rabbit hole and shine
Let love enter your soul
Take control
Don/'/t be an CENSORED WORD COS THEY WANT CONTROL

By banjosandwitch 22/08/16
https://soundcloud.com/gary-banjosandwitch-worthington/sweetbeats
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Control

Contributed by banjosandwitch on Tuesday, 23rd August 2016 @ 04:57:25 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Control

We are all in control
But some people always want to control you
Keep to your path
Each new day is a brand new start
Like each rumble in your tummy
Could lead to a smelly fart

Own the day, in a constructive way
If it is rainy or sunny
Think of something funny and smile
Cos everyone gets the blues
So take the red ones too
Come out of the rabbit hole and shine
Let love enter your soul
Take control
Don/'/t be an CENSORED WORD COS THEY WANT CONTROL

By banjosandwitch 22/08/16
https://soundcloud.com/gary-banjosandwitch-worthington/sweetbeats

Copyright © banjosandwitch ... [ 2016-08-23 04:57:25]
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Re: Control (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiny_Tina on Tuesday, 23rd August 2016 @ 05:01:34 AM AEST
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Oh quit your whining!

Re: Control (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Wednesday, 24th August 2016 @ 01:39:40 AM AEST
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Haha, to be fair though, everybody wants a semblance of control. What/'/s more annoying than being in a car where you can/'/t even control your own window? That/'/s pretty dehumanizing. Even more, with all the references of control, I think you/'/d enjoy playing Metal Gear Solid 4, as control is a big theme of the setting of the story.

Also, " cos everyone gets the blues,so take the red ones too"
Is that in regards to blue is sadness and red is passion?

Not bad overall, just try to figure more out about what control is and admit what it is deep down that upsets you. ;)

Re: Control (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 27th August 2016 @ 11:21:01 PM AEST
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control hmm......
as you say everyday is a brand new start.

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