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Darkness is all I need
Contributed by
voice of the silent
on
Sunday, 28th August 2016 @ 09:12:40 PM in AEST
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In this dark quiet room.
You/'/d think it was filled with gloom
The walls are bare,
Even a pin would explode with sound
This darkness is my home.
My solitude my sanctuary, away from it all.
Here I am myself, odd thing that I am
Here the walls are bare.
Because that/'/s me nothings there.
In my dark lonely room,
Sitting here in the gloom
I thrive alone, but society calls.
You can never let be, what is it you need of me.
Lock you all away here I will stay.
Odd as I am, let the whole world turn to sand.
All is well, lock the door throw away the key
Leave me in my cell warden.
This darkness is all I need.
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voice of the silent
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2016-08-28 21:12:40]
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Re: Darkness is all I need
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 29th August 2016 @ 07:05:37 AM AEST
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Many times we create our own prisons
and thats not such a bad thing sometimes
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Re: Darkness is all I need
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 30th August 2016 @ 08:36:29 AM AEST
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Very well written indeed. I fully get it!
Nice!
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Re: Darkness is all I need
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 3rd September 2016 @ 09:33:34 PM AEST
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you are taunting us with rough cut poetic glimmerings of greatness. I hope you revisit this poem in a few years. Off to read any more of you if there is.
You have my admiration and respect of a talent that has one way to go- up!
I praise you friend, but am not placating when I see what is either a diamond in the rough or a picture of complacency. Only you can answer that.
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Re: Darkness is all I need
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by FireStarter on
Friday, 21st October 2016 @ 03:32:06 PM AEST
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You read one of my poems, I thought I/'/d return the favor. I really loved this poem. I feel like I needed to read this one today. I keep feeling the need to lock myself away. It/'/s a good one :)
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