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The Lovers
Contributed by
duff
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Sunday, 4th September 2016 @ 08:45:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The wicked politely seat themselves
Prize seekers of next neighbors spoils
Hell extinguishes tomorrow/'/s parties
Joy cauterized using counterfeit smiles
And lustful tales screaming roll camera
Outside a windows pause talons rap
Performance temperament a program
With scorned hearted stance waiting
Dark schooling in hateful insistence
Affliction arousal appointment bound
Eyes diamond full death just their skill
Subtitles lack emotions when dying
Demise another foreign film teething
Copyright ©
duff
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2016-09-04 20:45:38]
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Re: The Lovers
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 5th September 2016 @ 01:51:20 AM AEST
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Dark flowing poetry is dominating tonight
good flow on this one.... |
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Re: The Lovers
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 5th September 2016 @ 09:17:37 AM AEST
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This poem was outside the box for me. Really unique in its execution. Great write.
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Re: The Lovers
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 18th December 2016 @ 12:04:38 PM AEST
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You set the bar high for choice lines in poetry, my friend. Wow! What an interesting way to view your surroundings. I like the way you write.
~Scorp |
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