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Bar sign flicker beating up the calm

Word bank held captive by whiskey

Empty pages with stop and go bile

Strangers are just dash of thought

Cigarettes hide face in kimono sway

Vexation telling brain to chew on lip

Barmaid cleavage controls the glass

Nine ball clatter can/'/t drown its flies

Tonights pen a loss in forever forfeit

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Aphasia

Contributed by duff on Wednesday, 21st September 2016 @ 10:41:55 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

A notebook sat with freckled ashes

Bar sign flicker beating up the calm

Word bank held captive by whiskey

Empty pages with stop and go bile

Strangers are just dash of thought

Cigarettes hide face in kimono sway

Vexation telling brain to chew on lip

Barmaid cleavage controls the glass

Nine ball clatter can/'/t drown its flies

Tonights pen a loss in forever forfeit

Copyright © duff ... [ 2016-09-21 10:41:55]
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Re: Aphasia (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Thursday, 22nd September 2016 @ 12:13:44 AM AEST
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I was transported to a corner neighborhood bar I used to frequent. Nice.

ming

Re: Aphasia (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Thursday, 22nd September 2016 @ 03:10:11 PM AEST
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Good one. I used to own a pub brought back some good and some bad memories. God bless

Greetings
Rus

Re: Aphasia (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 22nd September 2016 @ 06:01:37 PM AEST
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Boy the vision bought back memories way back in the day. I seen it and tasted it through your words as if I went back 25 years ago.

A good thing for me not to remember too often. Thanks for a great write.

James

Re: Aphasia (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Friday, 23rd September 2016 @ 09:48:50 PM AEST
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Your write brings us vivid snippets of scenes in a smokey bar. I envision this being penned on a cocktail napkin! How the mind wanders with the sights, sounds and fragrances of our surroundings!
How well you have described it!
softerware

Re: Aphasia (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th September 2016 @ 02:49:17 AM AEST
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Aphasia
we would wonder if
a writer would no longer
understand the words
that sat on the page

Aphasia a new name
to be dizzy or drunk

Aphasia a name

held down lost

- dear duff, difficult subject,
yet a full descriptive that one
should know about

well written!

Peace!

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