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24-09-2016....

How terrifying life can be sometimes,
Ahead of us lies fields of mines.
The daunting task sends frosty chills down your spine!
How we wish we could just hide,
For pushing on may dent our pride,
And from that we can not hide.
Life demands action on your part,
For this challenge life has placed on your path.
But don’t try too hard - just be smart
And hide like this little fly -
Who couldn’t brave the sky,
For he knew he would surely die!

RR
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This Little Fly....

Contributed by RussellReinhardt on Saturday, 24th September 2016 @ 12:59:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

photo IMG-20160924-WA0001_zpsrzq3kp5j.jpg

24-09-2016....

How terrifying life can be sometimes,
Ahead of us lies fields of mines.
The daunting task sends frosty chills down your spine!
How we wish we could just hide,
For pushing on may dent our pride,
And from that we can not hide.
Life demands action on your part,
For this challenge life has placed on your path.
But don’t try too hard - just be smart
And hide like this little fly -
Who couldn’t brave the sky,
For he knew he would surely die!

RR

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Re: This Little Fly.... (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Saturday, 24th September 2016 @ 05:55:57 PM AEST
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In life we must face of changellers
no mater how hard it may seem,hiding only prolong
it,your poem is nice and excellently written.like it a lot

Re: This Little Fly.... (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Sunday, 25th September 2016 @ 12:48:29 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem.
It can be a very cruel world!

James

Re: This Little Fly.... (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Monday, 26th September 2016 @ 01:09:18 PM AEST
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Time to reflect on our troubles can be a relief. It can open other doors. Especially with writing. Strength after pain. I enjoyed this. Well done

Re: This Little Fly.... (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 27th September 2016 @ 10:31:00 PM AEST
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Just have to remember
how to escape the prisons we create,
life is a crewel lye.....

Re: This Little Fly.... (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 1st October 2016 @ 11:35:28 AM AEST
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//There/'/s nowhere to run to ba-bay
There/'/s nowhere to hide!//

Your poem made me think of an old song (lyrics above). Thank you for that!

P.s "For pushing on may dent our pride".
Great line.

~Scorp

Re: This Little Fly.... (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Monday, 3rd October 2016 @ 11:01:31 PM AEST
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This is utterly enjoyable! A modern fairy tale to live by!
Run, hide, but never give up!
The photo is perfect! The rhyme, smooth as silk.
I do so love when you pontificate! You do it so well!
softerware

Re: This Little Fly.... (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Friday, 21st April 2017 @ 02:55:23 PM AEST
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I needed to read this x brilliant

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