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Many Dry Places:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Saturday, 24th September 2016 @ 05:49:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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We hear , see and know of many dry
places that are dead,
dry and broke ,the only thing alive
is the dry hot air that survive.
no plant,no insect,no animal,
no water,no people, no boards.
so many dry places
we refuse to explore them
In and out of our life are many dry places.
physically emotionally,and spiritually.
Yet we hide them from others perfectlly
like a good actor we pretend all is well
,when inside we are experience
real hell,in places we never dream could be so still
life many dry places.
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RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2016-09-24 17:49:25]
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Re: Many Dry Places:
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th September 2016 @ 12:10:09 AM AEST
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dry is the soil
underneath maybe it used
to be captured below the porous
rock
in the Aquifer
in the mind in the body and
in the soul
it used to be
Where now only the
Vast desert sands
exist
Like underneath the oceans
Like underneath the Sun
Like the gravity of it all
Like the tectonic plats
That move
And the swirling mists
of time casts away
star far far off
in distance
extreme
Good poem, dear Sir Richard / king of the poem.
Peace!
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Re: Many Dry Places:
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 25th September 2016 @ 12:13:48 PM AEST
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I/'/m feeling a bit like this today. Constant negative energy by those around you certainly dry up the positive thoughts even though you try not to let them. Same for the news. The last five lines are especially powerful and drive the poems message home. Well done!
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