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A hover board
I explained how it worked
I drew a square with a circle within
To show how the circles when placed at the four corners
Gave it momentum

First the square was envisioned
And a circle placed within the square
To circle the squares four corners into squared edges
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Circle in the square

Contributed by alicewhite on Friday, 21st April 2017 @ 07:39:12 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I dreamt of a farm house
A hover board
I explained how it worked
I drew a square with a circle within
To show how the circles when placed at the four corners
Gave it momentum

First the square was envisioned
And a circle placed within the square
To circle the squares four corners into squared edges
Non specific rotational apex of thought

Copyright © alicewhite ... [ 2017-04-21 19:39:12]
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Re: Circle in the square (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd April 2017 @ 01:00:53 AM AEST
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well now, who would not get lost in that
who would not get lost with only three
you would encircle love even if it hurt you
to touch it like a hot stove
the smoke filters particle up up up
if flies the dust flies some comes back down
some small particle float only to be seen
captured in the light
A poem or a painting capturing the dust
rounding out the corners
west east north or south
And then comes the rain
your eyes on me my eyes on you
Peace!

Re: Circle in the square (User Rating: 1 )
by Durango on Thursday, 19th April 2018 @ 08:24:25 PM AEST
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many sides to this round poem.
I was wonderfully lost in the geometry.

Re: Circle in the square (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 17th January 2019 @ 09:05:13 AM AEST
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Well I dont do geometry bur I got caught up in the circle with ya
very mesmerizing
emy

Re: Circle in the square (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 17th January 2019 @ 09:06:34 AM AEST
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Well I dont do geometry bur I got caught up in the circle with ya
emy

Re: Circle in the square (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Sunday, 13th September 2020 @ 03:27:10 AM AEST
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A magic carpet ride....
Mod 18 at it again😞😞

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