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[title] => Where angels fear to tread
[time] => 2017-05-26 16:07:43
[hometext] => I went to the shop to buy some wine
[bodytext] => Where once there was a soul
There is now nothing more than an empty dark void black hole
I have swallowed all goodness with my insanity
And replaced it with a venom so foul as to permeate every fiber of my reality
It is of my very own creation
And I suffocate on its fumes with loss , longing
And utter indignation.
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Where angels fear to tread
Contributed by
alicewhite
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Friday, 26th May 2017 @ 04:07:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Where once there was a soul
There is now nothing more than an empty dark void black hole
I have swallowed all goodness with my insanity
And replaced it with a venom so foul as to permeate every fiber of my reality
It is of my very own creation
And I suffocate on its fumes with loss , longing
And utter indignation.
Copyright ©
alicewhite
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2017-05-26 16:07:43]
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Re: Where angels fear to tread
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by Invierno on
Friday, 26th May 2017 @ 11:18:11 PM AEST
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I like this Alice. I remember feeling the same. I wrote a poem in way of comment. It/'/s two above this one on the board.
Invierno |
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Re: Where angels fear to tread
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th May 2017 @ 02:01:43 AM AEST
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funny how things come at a person
one by one all in a seemingly simple line
"there/'/s a bluebird in my heart that wants to get out",
but I am too tough for him, I say, stay in there, I am not going to let anybody see you"
Reminds me of my favorite writer
Charlie Bukowski.
Peace! |
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Re: Where angels fear to tread
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 27th May 2017 @ 03:13:28 AM AEST
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Tremendous angst and beautifully written.
It must be in the air. But do not despair, you are not alone. I took four months to help my mother recover from a serious illness only to see her go back to the hospital again today. They say God only gives you what you can handle. I think God has more faith in me than I do.
God bless you.... |
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Re: Where angels fear to tread
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by joydeep_nath on
Sunday, 28th May 2017 @ 03:06:42 PM AEST
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| good!..simple direct and succinct ! |
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Re: Where angels fear to tread
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 7th July 2017 @ 04:46:05 PM AEST
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Direct and to the point, carried along by its raw display of emotion.
Life is complicated and crazy, we have to try and get through it the best way we can!!
Steve |
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Re: Where angels fear to tread
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by Kane on
Monday, 26th March 2018 @ 02:14:40 AM AEST
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The darkness lives within you, for I have enjoyed the read.
Kane |
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Re: Where angels fear to tread
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th November 2020 @ 06:35:21 AM AEST
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//Did you drink the entire bottle? 🙂
I have pondered if the soul can actually be killed. I guess that started from watching Angel or some other TV show.
I/'/m more of a happy drunk, except for the time I almost drowned. Maybe smoke pot instead???
Remember there are always people that like you and love you. Yes, they/'/re different...like and love. There are those that are amazed by you. One of them is this dude.
This poem, whether rooted in reality or rooted in fiction...or both, is truly an artful splendor. You are truly a unique writer and it/'/s great you don/'/t deal in the cliché.
Thank you.
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Re: Where angels fear to tread
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th November 2020 @ 06:38:50 AM AEST
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// Poop, once again I neglected to say the title caught my attention. It, in itself, inspires thoughts in me to possibly write out something about "where angels fear to tread."
Thank you. |
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