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Just once I want to stop this piercing pain from digging deep inside of me.
Just once I want to save my soul from being rotten,
Just once I want to feel whole, not completely broken.

Just once I want not to lie on the bed of needles,
Just once I want to solve all the mind-boggling riddles.
Just once I want to stand upright and leave the swampy ground,
Just once I want to feel good, not so woefully down!

Just once I want to be colourful like the butterfly’s iridescent wings,
Just once I want them not to have me on a string!
Just once I want to stop the paroxysms of rage,
Just once I want to grapple with this bitter ache.

Just once I want not to drink my own tears,
Just once I want to shrug off all the doubts and fears.
Just once I want not to make any more mistakes,
Just once I want to have a lucky break!

Just once I want to have a good night's sleep,
Just once I want to have some peace.
Just once I want them to let me be!
Just once I want to know; has God listened to me?
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Just Once

Contributed by Saira on Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Just once I want to stop these wretched thoughts from coming down so hard on me,
Just once I want to stop this piercing pain from digging deep inside of me.
Just once I want to save my soul from being rotten,
Just once I want to feel whole, not completely broken.

Just once I want not to lie on the bed of needles,
Just once I want to solve all the mind-boggling riddles.
Just once I want to stand upright and leave the swampy ground,
Just once I want to feel good, not so woefully down!

Just once I want to be colourful like the butterfly’s iridescent wings,
Just once I want them not to have me on a string!
Just once I want to stop the paroxysms of rage,
Just once I want to grapple with this bitter ache.

Just once I want not to drink my own tears,
Just once I want to shrug off all the doubts and fears.
Just once I want not to make any more mistakes,
Just once I want to have a lucky break!

Just once I want to have a good night's sleep,
Just once I want to have some peace.
Just once I want them to let me be!
Just once I want to know; has God listened to me?




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Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by full_blur on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 03:17:46 AM AEST
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I like your repetative mantra, it adds strength to your words. I wish I could read it again!


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 06:58:25 AM AEST
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Lordy! such strength in these words. it made me cry.what more i can say ?


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 05:06:20 PM AEST
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just once...it takes a smile...to make the pain
all seem worth while!!!
Yes He hears you!
Angel always..Godspeed!!! joni


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 08:36:38 AM AEST
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Lying on besd of needles and drinking tears.. deep feeling of sorrow...... beautifuly written..
venkat


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 07:35:23 PM AEST
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Your writing is powerful...i want to help

close your eyes..
turn half way around
open your eyes
maybe all the pain will come out in reverse.
if it works..you'd be happy again

maybe it will work...


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 07:36:15 PM AEST
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Your writing is powerful...i want to help

close your eyes..
turn half way around
open your eyes
maybe all the pain will come out in reverse.
if it works..you'd be happy again

maybe it will work...


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 07:36:49 PM AEST
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Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 04:43:02 PM AEST
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When I was a fighter pilot I invented a mental proceedure for putting al my troubles behined me as I walked/ran out to my aircraft..
I imagined heavy steel shutters dropping down on each dorway, ground duties, debts, girl friends, appointments, problems etc etc etc etc leaving me clear to concentrate on the flight and nothing else

It takes practice but the demands of the task in hand make it essential. After a year or so the whole thing becomes automatic as the pre-flight checks take over.

Concentrate on what you are going to do next.


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by gohar on Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 03:05:48 PM AEST
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Hello and AsSalam,

I like your poems. Don't you have website of your own. Just Once is a nice poem. Please visit me some time.

Allah Hafiz

Ashraf Gohar Goreja


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 04:50:27 PM AEST
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This is just another magnificient touch from the deepest corners of ur mind, which indeed reflect the writing abilities in u upto a very high honour!! Congrats!!

Just once I want to leave this busy world in calm and peace.
But no doubt this very line stands no where from ur master piece!!


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Chenobi on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 02:51:39 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. You know very well how to put your feelings into words. Very nice.


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 07:52:33 AM AEST
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its a very powerful poem and shows determination and a cry for help. good work!!! gettin better n better everyday.-----nida


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 09:40:21 AM AEST
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Thank you for encouraging words. I appreciate that.


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 02:57:22 PM AEST
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How nice! I'll try.
Thank you for your uplifting remarks.


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 03:02:36 PM AEST
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Okay, you can :-)
Thank you for ur kind remarks.


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 03:05:43 PM AEST
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Yes, He hears everyone...just likes to take His sweet time though :-)


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 03:06:21 PM AEST
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Yes, He hears everyone...just likes to take His sweet time though :-)
Thank you Joni!


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 03:09:43 PM AEST
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Thank you venkat for your kind remarks.


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 03:16:43 PM AEST
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Waalikum Assalam!
Well no, I don't have any website of my own. I think my talent still needs a lot polishing to shine enough. But anyway, thank you for liking my poems.


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 03:24:45 PM AEST
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Thanks Chenobi!


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Good_King_Bragi on Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 12:54:16 AM AEST
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LOL. He was so sincere and ardent he posted it several times!


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 04:13:58 PM AEST
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our hearts and spirit take such a pounding sometimes, i have questioned my God too.
sad, and very beautiful. Crow


Re: Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 05:59:54 PM AEST
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And hopefully HE will answer for sure! Thanks for your kind remarks my friend.




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