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Let the clouds weep my tears,
Let the wind howl my cries.
I shall not show my fears,
I’ll hide within lies.
The ground beneath my feet,
The world rushing by.
All I hear is my heart beat,
As I make the world rush by.
I play the game,
A master, a thief.
I hide my fears in shame,
With the pounding of my feet.
Day after day,
Game after game.
It’s a terrible game to play,
I’ll hide my fears in shame.
I’ll always play,
I’ll always win, lose.
Until the day,
When I have to choose. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 253 [topic] => 43 [informant] => JamesHowlett [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Life

Contributed by JamesHowlett on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Life

Let the clouds weep my tears,
Let the wind howl my cries.
I shall not show my fears,
I’ll hide within lies.
The ground beneath my feet,
The world rushing by.
All I hear is my heart beat,
As I make the world rush by.
I play the game,
A master, a thief.
I hide my fears in shame,
With the pounding of my feet.
Day after day,
Game after game.
It’s a terrible game to play,
I’ll hide my fears in shame.
I’ll always play,
I’ll always win, lose.
Until the day,
When I have to choose.

Copyright Â© JamesHowlett ... [ 2003-06-03 01:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 01:12:46 AM AEST
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very powerful poem, short but provides a good view into your life(or whoever it's about) very good, i enjoyed it! Luv ya lotz-Lisa

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesDylan on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 10:42:18 PM AEST
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Please know that you can always show your fears to me, you can vent to me always. Never feel like you are alone because I will always be here for you! This is a good poem, all your poems are good. Keep writing!!

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:23:49 PM AEST
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Good poem but you are far from unique. We all play this game to a greater or lesser extent.

Try not to dwell on it

Some never make the choice, time overtakes them.

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by lovesucks on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:20:12 PM AEST
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very emotional I enjoyed this I can relate completely. I liked this very much keep up the good work.
theresa (lovesucks)

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by lovesucks on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:32:59 AM AEST
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This was a very expressive poem, I can relate all to well, you put into words what I could not. Thank you. Keep writing
theresa

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